Howl's Comments

I love profiles that are like vignettes (if I used or spelled that word right) This one in particular is really good about indirectly giving details about Howl's personality, predicament, and her relationship to whom I'm guessing is Mona! It's all layed out very nicely, and as for Mona herself, she seems like a really good disaster friend. Definitely doesn't have her life in a way most people would call "together" but is willing to stick her neck out for her friends. I respect her for that! Her design's also really neat! I like how you didn't shy away from details like the sunken eyes, the pointy nose, and the cracked lips!

(PS Your reply on the OC Job Fair thread was a joy to read!)

Ok the first thing that stood out to me was how the bio was written; it's written in a story-like format, and that really stood out to me! But that aside, the implications that Howl sacrificed her(? I'm not sure about pronouns so forgive me if Howl's pronouns aren't she/her) humanity/human soul for something is definitely really interesting; it's vague but there are some details for the reader to piece together what happened, and what's that about an altar? That just makes it even more interesting, now I wanna know what happened! 

The woman that was mentioned in the story is also really intriguing, did she also sacrifice her humanity? What's going to happen to them both? Does the woman have more info about her somewhere? But really, the story you have for Howl is really interesting, I'd really love to read more about her story!!

I love her!!! Also your writing is stunning!