This turned out to be kinda long rip I'm sorry,
But aaaa Marion is such a neat character!! His backstory's super unique and I love the contrasts in his personality (Him acting overall pretty timid and uncertain but being scary when angry and liking the more grisly kinds of stories)!! It's really easy to see through his backstory how he's developed as a character, and it's definitely in some really interesting ways!!! It's nice that there's so much explanation in it for what he's like now, as well! There's also not a whole lot of OCs that deal with lifelong illnesses/health problems in general, at least not as far as I've seen, so it's always nice to see that someone's including representation of that in their characters!
Overall like I said Marion is super neat and interesting and unique and Just Generally Very Good!!! There's so much info on him here but even despite that I can't help but find myself still wanting to learn more, cause it's just got me even more intrigued than I was before!
Also, not about the character, but I can't resist mentioning how absolutely wonderful your writing is?? It's so detailed, I'm honestly kind of amazed with it, but even though it's so in-depth I was still engaged and interested the whole time!! Appearance descriptions especially were really nicely done, which is impressive to me especially as someone who struggles with describing how things look! But just, in general you did a great job with his bio, seriously!!
Sorry I'm replying 9 hours late I was sleeping zzzz
But oh gosh thank you so much for the comment!! It seriously made me smile so much and hearing all those nice things about writing is making my heart feel all warm!!! I don't even have words to express how happy your comment made me ;;
No it's fine when you replied now I was sleeping too so rip (Although I know I don't,, Have to reply but shh)
But of course!! I'm always happy to tell people how good their OCs are and Marion is definitely a really good OC!! I haven't read any other of your OCs' bios fully admittedly but I have skimmed over them once or twice quickly and honestly they all seem really cool and it's really clear how much attention and development you've given them, it's admirable how much effort you've put into em, so I'm happy to compliment them, they deserve it!! And I'm also happy to compliment your writing since that definitely deserves the compliments as well, it really is wonderfully done!!
(...Also main reason for replying again is thank you for reminding me of this because I actually had planned to favorite him both because he's such a neat great character but also because definite bio-writing goals but it slipped my mind because I am A Fool so yes thank you for unknowingly reminding me ahah,)
:O I LOVE 'EM! Marion is, in both senses, just so nice. Simply, goodly, faint in many ways. Overall 10/10, would play clarinet with them.
(Irrelevant, sorry) Also, if you mind me asking this here, how did you write his background/info in such a good way? I'm still struggling to get the right tone and word choice with Raielle's backstory. :/
I don't mind at all! Although I'm not sure how well I can answer, I feel like I just do this stuff without much thinking, haha. I tend to write a lot though and have tried my best consuming English literature (I'm not a native speaker, my native language is Finnish) so I have taken bits and pieces from other writer's styles and tones for sure ; v ; /
Well, it makes sense then why you write so GOOD then; I don't read so often. Though I do indulge myself onto a good book now and then. Have you ever read Simon v.s The homo sapiens agenda? It's a good LGBT book to read. I also am too busy and preoccupied at times to even consider continuing on my ill wrote, rough draft of a story called Realization. :O / Though when I do write, I love it. I want to help make Raielle hook up with Denny and Antoniette sooo badly. I've gone too far for my cause to quit. I know what I need to do, but I don't know how to do it, is the thing. Sorry about the long comment.
I have gotten back to prose only recently when I started my literature major studies in university, before that I mostly read manga haha and read some visual novels. I tend to have trouble focusing on books nowadays, although I can manage if it's for uni. And no I haven't, I have to check it out! Young adult isn't exactly my kind of genre but any LGBT+ content is always worth checking at least !!
I think the most important thing is to just try to write and work as much as possible. I tend to take part of nanowrimos and camp nanos to make sure I actually write and make sure I dont have other plans for that month `v´9
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