Oh no, that's what I was afraid of. xDDD Well, I'll include it here!
"Hane was great to work with! As a writer, they obviously spent a lot of time researching and asking questions about my request to make sure the characters and universe were captured just right. The characters I requested a story about were written perfectly and just about spot-on to how I would have written them! The dialogue and action of the story was well-written also, and it was a fun read!
Hane was also wonderful to communicate with and kept me updated on a regular basis with this project. I was happy to work with them and I highly recommend them!"
Omfg you... just omfg... thank you! I'm glad you liked it and that I got the characters right --- it makes me really happy that you said they were spot on ^^
You're welcome~ It inspired me to keep doing my best as I continue to write dialogue for my characters! Sometimes I worry that when I'm writing their story, I'm making them OOC because it's been so long since I've worked with them... But reading the commission was really reassuring and made me happy that someone else at least really understood what I was trying to convey in their profiles. ^^ Thank you again!
Your profiles are really easy to read and understand - you did a great job of fleshing Sam and Alexander out so getting them in character wasn't hard after I scrapped my first couple of ideas for the heist lol.
Honestly character dialogue is really hard??? Like it's frustrating because you want to make sure it's obvious who's speaking but it can be hard since most accents don't convey well in written form. Best idea - write little drabble about your characters from time to time, and that should help you thibk about how your characters sound and react to things.
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Forgot to ask, but were you able to see the review I gave you on Commiss.io? I hate to think you weren't able to see what I thought of the commission!
6 years, 11 months ago
That's... actually a great question. I can see the rating but not the review e3e
Edit: so yeah, I can only see the stars and not the attached comment lol
6 years, 11 months ago Edited 4:50 pm
Oh no, that's what I was afraid of. xDDD Well, I'll include it here!
"Hane was great to work with! As a writer, they obviously spent a lot of time researching and asking questions about my request to make sure the characters and universe were captured just right. The characters I requested a story about were written perfectly and just about spot-on to how I would have written them! The dialogue and action of the story was well-written also, and it was a fun read!
Hane was also wonderful to communicate with and kept me updated on a regular basis with this project. I was happy to work with them and I highly recommend them!"
6 years, 11 months ago
Omfg you... just omfg... thank you! I'm glad you liked it and that I got the characters right --- it makes me really happy that you said they were spot on ^^
6 years, 11 months ago
You're welcome~ It inspired me to keep doing my best as I continue to write dialogue for my characters! Sometimes I worry that when I'm writing their story, I'm making them OOC because it's been so long since I've worked with them... But reading the commission was really reassuring and made me happy that someone else at least really understood what I was trying to convey in their profiles. ^^ Thank you again!
6 years, 11 months ago
Your profiles are really easy to read and understand - you did a great job of fleshing Sam and Alexander out so getting them in character wasn't hard after I scrapped my first couple of ideas for the heist lol.
Honestly character dialogue is really hard??? Like it's frustrating because you want to make sure it's obvious who's speaking but it can be hard since most accents don't convey well in written form. Best idea - write little drabble about your characters from time to time, and that should help you thibk about how your characters sound and react to things.
6 years, 11 months ago