You're welcome~ It inspired me to keep doing my best as I continue to write dialogue for my characters! Sometimes I worry that when I'm writing their story, I'm making them OOC because it's been so long since I've worked with them... But reading the commission was really reassuring and made me happy that someone else at least really understood what I was trying to convey in their profiles. ^^ Thank you again!
Your profiles are really easy to read and understand - you did a great job of fleshing Sam and Alexander out so getting them in character wasn't hard after I scrapped my first couple of ideas for the heist lol.
Honestly character dialogue is really hard??? Like it's frustrating because you want to make sure it's obvious who's speaking but it can be hard since most accents don't convey well in written form. Best idea - write little drabble about your characters from time to time, and that should help you thibk about how your characters sound and react to things.
I'm glad their profiles turned out easy to read! ^^
And you're definitely right--I think writing about them on a regular basis really needs to be part of my routine. Best way to get to know a character is to just work with them. ^^ Really determined to write more often!
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You're welcome~ It inspired me to keep doing my best as I continue to write dialogue for my characters! Sometimes I worry that when I'm writing their story, I'm making them OOC because it's been so long since I've worked with them... But reading the commission was really reassuring and made me happy that someone else at least really understood what I was trying to convey in their profiles. ^^ Thank you again!
6 years, 11 months ago
Your profiles are really easy to read and understand - you did a great job of fleshing Sam and Alexander out so getting them in character wasn't hard after I scrapped my first couple of ideas for the heist lol.
Honestly character dialogue is really hard??? Like it's frustrating because you want to make sure it's obvious who's speaking but it can be hard since most accents don't convey well in written form. Best idea - write little drabble about your characters from time to time, and that should help you thibk about how your characters sound and react to things.
6 years, 11 months ago
I'm glad their profiles turned out easy to read! ^^
And you're definitely right--I think writing about them on a regular basis really needs to be part of my routine. Best way to get to know a character is to just work with them. ^^ Really determined to write more often!
6 years, 11 months ago
You can totally do it o3ob
6 years, 11 months ago