Please review my story!

Posted 4 years, 21 days ago (Edited 4 years, 19 days ago) by mrloveache

It's a WIP, so not all the chapters are up...

In essence, it's a story about a flower, a forest, a priest, and a god.

But please let me know your thoughts, especially concerning areas that should be improved!

And if you enjoyed it, I'd love to know that too ^^ 

http://archiveofourown.org/works/23357974

VilksDessin

Lovely story so far! I enjoyed reading it!!

I'm not good at writing so I don't think I can give criticism, but I would love to read more from you

mrloveache

VilksDessin 

Thanks so much for the comment !!

I'm working on putting out more chapters, so I hope you'll enjoy reading those too ! 

Some of my older work is up on my AO3 profile, but I doubt they're decent enough to mention ><

VilksDessin

mrloveache

I would try to keep an eye for updates!

I'm not familiarized with AO3 but I'll try my best, and I also saw some of your older work there! I will read more of that eventually haha

But seriously, loved the way you described the forest! I'm probably a little bit bias for that type of setting tho

mrloveache

VilksDessin 

I appreciate that ^^ I hope you enjoy whatever you decide to read !

I'd be happy to answer any questions you have as well !

Oh then we're the same ! I love forest settings the most, since I always wanted to move out of the city into a peaceful cabin... 

VilksDessin

mrloveache

For sure will do! I'll let you know any questions

And that is really sweet! A life surrounded by woods sounds sounds like a dream, even better having such a strong connection with animals like un your story haha