I'll review your OC!

Posted 3 years, 9 months ago (Edited 3 years, 9 months ago) by Kree-Kat

Would you be interested videos like this?

145 Votes yes, seems interesting
12 Votes no, not my cup of tea

Alright, clickbait title aside I really will be reviewing OCs!

But I'll be doing it over on my youtube channel kree-katdoesthings. I've been wanting to do this project for a while and I think one of the best places to find OCs to look at is right here on TH! But I don't want to be like some videos on youtube that do roasts or make fun of "bad" OCs using cringe culture. I'd much rather do an actual critique or review looking at the good and things that can be improved upon. and its something I haven't seen done before in this way. Kind of reminiscant of those "Critique the design above" games that used to float around on the forums. I'm not going to do this to someone who doesn't expect that its coming and hasn't given me permission soooooooo....

that's where you guys come in! Send me your best OCs to look at and I'll pick ones to review~

Rules:

  1. Must be your own OC
  2. Artwork and design must be either made by you or with explicit permission from the artist
  3. Must have some form of visual reference (full body preferred)
  4. Must have some kind of personality or story attached
  5. I will not show any NSFW references or discuss any NSFW content
  6. CS and non CS welcome, Fan characters welcome


I will be discussing story, personality, and design. The “quality” of artwork itself and the skill level or style of any artwork won’t be discussed, it isn’t an art critique, this will be a character development review. Humanoid designs are preferred over anthro or feral as i have more experience working with them. Same with fan characters, I’ll be more likely to review ones that are from series I’m already familiar with. I’ll at least look at everything submitted to me though! Please Comment below for submissions as I'll lose track of PMs!

Submission form:

Username@social_media_platform: (pick your preferred for credits)
Character: (also include any extra links to other info you want me to see)
CS?: y/n (please include links to CS info so i can credit properly)
Fan Character: y/n
Anything else?:


You'll know if I've chosen you because I'll DM you a google form with the rules for this review and a disclaimer saying you gave me permission to display your OC and work (with full credits given of course) If you are using an adopt and the original artist has given permission I'll ask you to provide proof of that before I start working on a video for it! Thanks everyone, I look forward to seeing your characters!

Amber-Lynne

This... is an awesome idea. 

I'll have to do up a fullbody piece of one of my characters (instead of just the busts I've been doing lately XD) to throw atyou for this~<3

Also, gonna follow you on YT as well~<3

Kree-Kat

Amber-LynneMewlatte

Thank you! I totally feel you on those bust shots, so many of my own OCs are without color pallettes lol. And have fun with your development mew!

Solaestial

Username@social_media_platform: [email protected] (or solaestial@twitter)

Character: Caelestis

CS?: nope

Fan Character: nope

Anything else?: i'm a bit nervous, but i've been kinda craving some sort of critique for a while, and would really like to know what people genuinely think of him, how to potentially make him more likeable without changing his personality too much, or otherwise just improve him in general. i hope it's fine that he doesn't have much in the ways of an actual story. honestly i wouldn't even really know how to go about adding one with how he is, but who knows, advice on that could be interesting too

anyway, this whole idea seems super neat and i'm really interested to see how it goes!

NockeyNoo

Username@social_media_platform: [email protected] (or NockeyNoo@Deviantart)

Character: Cabbar

CS?: no

Fan Character: yes

Anything else?: here's my oc, this oc is kind of anthro-ish, cartoonish design, this oc has more personality than all my ocs which is my best attempt, i know u looking for humanoid, but it doesn't matter if i send it, it's ok if u don't do review this oc. I'm here becoz i got interested

tim-in-a-box

Will absolutwly watch, but alas, I have no characters to offer :'D

Timber-Wolf

Username@social_media_platform: (pick your preferred for credits) Arik-Wolf on toyhouse :)

Character: I have this boy, he has some more sensitive themes but they are pretty fluffed over. If you’d feel comfortable with him.  He’s a rock star so some of it comes with the territory.

https://toyhou.se/4974401.john-timbers


CS?: y/n (please include links to CS info so i can credit properly): yes

https://toyhou.se/7724440.werewolf-species-guidelines

Fan Character: nope he’s original 

Anything else?: I’ve never had someone review one of my characters before so I’m a bit nervous. But excited for the opportunity hoping I can learn something and make him better :) maybe just let me know if your interested in him?

MARSFAUN

ASKSJDKS I WOULD LOVE REVIEWS ON MY KIDDOS!! I don’t have their stories down though and it is the middle of the night aaaHH I need to do this tomorrow I hope I don’t lose this hhHHHHHHHHHH

Kree-Kat

tim-in-a-box

That totally alright! This is going to be open indefinitely for right now so you have time if you want. Thanks for the support!

Kree-Kat

ChocoStarii

Tagging you so you dont lose this! Dont worry about needing to rush them, this is going to be open for a while yet so have fun! Glad to give you a push to finish getting everything down!

enqorin

Username@Willow__ Toyhouse


Character: Jay https://toyhou.se/7651444.jay

Race: Dog

Affiliation: Formaly tooth, WolverineFang yard


Backstory: Growing up alone in the forest,  Jay quickly picked up the basic skills of camouflage.  One day, she was picked up by a girl with a strange bandana around her neck, her hand held out in the promis of food. Jay fell into her trap, and found herself trapped in a  dogfighting yard- A yard by the name of WolverineFang.  After a while, she began to pick up how things worked around here- and told herself- If she had to be here, she would at least make her mark. Full of new dedication, she began winning more fights, and became a formidable wepon when placed next to the other dogs. she climbed higher and higher- 'till the night she lost. beaten and bruised, pride ruined, she was kicked out of the rink into her yard, tail between her legs. she watched as the victor- a dog from an opposing yard, was paraded out of the rink, licking his lips happily.  Jay was furious. Legs tense with rage, she climbed over the fence and paced towards the vicktor's yard, hell-bent for revenge.


Fan Character: n


Anything else?: Jay has over ten different forms for different roleplays, but her main form is a dog form the 'tooth and chain" roleplay on scratch.


Tell me if I need to add anything


salida

whoaaa this seems like a really fun idea!

Username: wallstaples on toyhouse
Character: anyone from this folder. (or preferably this guy)
CS?: no
Fan Character: no
Anything else?: i'm really interested in how thisll go omg...

Minanami

Is it alright if I make a submission post when I'm still working on my OC's page (but her back story is mostly finished though it's not yet on her page)??

Username@social_media_platform: Mina_nanami@toyhouse/instagram

Character: Sylvia?? 

CS?: No

Fan Character: No

Anything else?: This seems really interesting, and also, I feel like I need critique on her outfit design the most. 

Molly Lunar_Pretzel

Username@social_media_platform: [email protected]

CS: No

Fan character: Nope

Thank you so much!