Esfir adult Approval

Posted 4 years, 1 month ago (Edited 4 years, 26 days ago) by SarahWere

Adult Approval Image: https://toyhou.se/7154979.esfir#25852301

Link to profile: https://toyhou.se/7154979.esfir

Link to tracker: https://toyhou.se/~bulletins/159467.astrolyte-tracker

Name: Esfir

Approval Image: https://www.deviantart.com/sarahjanematthee/art/Esfir-the-Astrolyte-679172260

Body Type: Biped

Body Style: Raptor

Upgrades:

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Head Fluff

Ear Fluff

Tail Fluff

Body Fluff

Nubblers

Baby Teeth

Pupils

Mind's Eye

Image Requirements:

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1. www.deviantart.com/sarahjanema…

2. www.deviantart.com/sarahjanema…

3. www.deviantart.com/sarahjanema…

Magic Approval Comment: toyhou.se/~bulletins/157258.ma…

Hey! The approval will have to be fully edited into this post! please do so and i can take a proper look at it.

Okay!

https://f2.toyhou.se/file/f2-toyhou-se/images/25852301_P96WlulR9k9vq95.jpg

Name: Esfir

Approval Image: https://www.deviantart.com/sarahjanematthee/art/Esfir-the-Astrolyte-679172260

Body Type: Biped

Body Style: Raptor

Upgrades:

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Head Fluff

Ear Fluff

Tail Fluff

Body Fluff

Nubblers

Baby Teeth

Pupils

Mind's Eye

Image Requirements:

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1. www.deviantart.com/sarahjanema…

2. www.deviantart.com/sarahjanema…

3. www.deviantart.com/sarahjanema…

Magic Approval Comment: toyhou.se/~bulletins/157258.ma…

Can you please edit the main post?

Yes! Sorry about that! I can't seem to do anything right :' D

I have edited the main post!

Esfir is looking pretty good so far, but a few things need to be changed!

- Their back legs are far too short for Raptor stance - They need to look much longer than the arms!

- Their back needs to be more sloped down! It shouldn't be straight.

- You seem to be missing a link to the characters toyhouse profile and your tracker to the post! please add these in!

I edited his back and made a tracker, previously I didn't have one ahaha...

I made his legs short on purpose, he's a failure as a raptor stance lol! Esfir will never run fast like them and I wanted

to give him character and body variation instead of making him a stereotypical raptor. But if I must still edit his legs

longer then I will of course :'>

The legs definitely need to be made longer still! they don't have to be nearly as large as the stance reference image of course but they at least need to look bigger than the arms, which seem to be the same size right now!

Also the back isn't quite sloped still! Although the current way you've drawn is pretty good, the character still appears horizontal to the ground - their back should be angled so they appear more vertical.

Alright, I made the edits and I think he looks perfect now! >:3

Approved! Please link this thread on your tracker as Esfir's adult approval!

Yay!!! Thank you! : D

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