Your OC is defeated by the above OC!

Posted 5 years, 11 months ago (Edited 5 years, 3 months ago) by raihan


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The first user starts!

 Melody the Marionette Auralina33

What's going on?

The night had fallen, giving space for her voice to ring out, for her control to sink in and make his programming drive him to wander outside his lonely library, but now it was finally lifting, weak rays of sunshine creeping in through the windows.

It all felt like a bad dream, and it didn't seem like Mars was the only one that felt that way. The animatronic seemed extremely disoriented- Looking around from the other side of the glass, glowing pink optics seeming almost an overwhelming red when the light hit them right.

This had been difficult. Terrifying? Most definitely.

Melody wandered up to the glass door of his café with slow, dazed movements, and tried the doorknob, those irises shrinking slightly as it failed to open. He started to pull and yank at it, his hands barely being able to keep a grip of the polished metal, and he looked at the human outside, his head twitching to the side slightly, before his movements regained their almost human-like smoothness.

Please- Please- Please- Please no. I don't want to rot in here alone. No one comes see me here anymore...

His mouth opened on its hinge, like that of a doll's, but his eyes were those of a very living person who wanted to plead, "...please..."

There were specific words begging to be said, but they wouldn't come out. His mind was in too much of a fog for him to find them. He could only ask, almost dumbly, quiet and shaky, "...What's happening? Why is this happening?"

"I didn't mean to scare you." He stopped trying to open the door, and stood off-balance he was, slowly making as if to hug himself, "I really didn't. I'm not dangerous. I'm a friend. We're... all... friends. I promise."

The hesitation in his voice was unexplained, and hardly showed up in his face, but it was there.

It seemed like there wasn't much fixing him for now. 

Not without dealing with that horrible rabbit first, at least.

(Reply: I read your follow-up yesterday before going to sleep and it made me so excited that I struggled to do so GFDSG. That's SO well-written, and it really gets across how bad Marciya feels for Melody, I could see her and Mel being friends if they got a chance to be. FNAF is definitely not everyone's cup of tea, but that just makes it even more flattering to me that you like my guy! He needs help, he really does)


(Response to VictoryDrawsManga! Warning for violence, dissociation and death)

It was going to be over soon. 

...Well, it would be over for her. Melody and his friends weren't so lucky. 

There was no foreseeable ending for the state they were in, and there certainly wasn't any light at the end of the tunnel by now. It had caved in long ago.

Dragging her was awkward and far more complicated than it really needed to be. Melody wrapped his entire arms around her neck and kept it in a death grip just to be able to move her along and walk without being shoved off. Like some kind of strange hug. It felt familiar, but wrong, and the source of the familiarity was lost to fog and code by now.

His eyes snapped open as something hard and heeled struck his chest, and he could hear a gasp that he realized wasn't hers. His arms shook and nearly let go, but then were yanked back, put back in their position tighter. His stomach hatch clattered louder, more loosely, and it was starting to hurt.

The shouting, the hitting, the unreality of his own actions, made the ground swim from one side to the other, making him feel like he was walking on a haphazard boat, wandering upside-down. The pain in his chest was coupled with an uneasy pressure that he couldn't get rid of, not as long as he was moving, and he couldn't stop moving. His legs were practically functioning on their own, and so were his arms.

"...Melody. Over here."

That voice stood out uncomfortably, like staring directly at a lighthouse's beam.

His expression didn't change. He could feel his lips slightly curled upwards and his eyes staring ahead, but he wasn't smiling. He knew it as if he were looking at himself in a mirror. That wasn't a smile.

That commanding voice gained a slight harshness when she spoke again, "Don't waste my time. Over here."

There was no longer much movement in his arms. Like a machine being pushed to maximum productivity, his body hastened, then he slowly stopped, and looked forward, trying to make his eyes see what was in front of him.

It was a woman. Blonde, in a nightguard outfit, with those green eyes that seemed to have a glint of their own in the darkness.

She was wearing a security guard outfit, and with it, she bore not a look of concern, but a strong frown coupled with cold, hard eyes, like being thrown to the pavement in a winter night.

She gestured with an object she was holding. His eyes stayed focused on her face, not looking at it, as he loosened his grip and let his friend fall.

"Good job." Vanessa remarked almost off-handedly, like she felt it necessary to do so. As if it would encourage him to obey better.

There was the sound of sharp metal going through skin and bone and striking the ground below, the feeling of something warm splattering his pants and shoes. It quickly began to lose that warmth, though.

Once the deed was done, the blonde woman started working on the aftermath, and talked into her walkie-talkie, "One down, Ivie."

He could do nothing but stare, being given the chance to just stand there as he was left without orders.

There would be no more nights of sitting down and letting friendly, gentle hands ask to brush through his hair, cautiously checking if he was comfortable and wasn't in pain, always glad to see him relax. No, now, there would only be wide grins and ruffles that were just a little too hard, compliments to how soft and pretty his hair was, harsh fingers gripping strands and yanking his head up when they were angry.

And he'd helped with it.

He tilted his head slightly, looking at the mess by his feet, and slurred out, "...why..."

"Yoko..."


Here it is! Sorry it took so long lol, I got a random headache

The next person can choose whether to go with regular Melody or hacked Melody, with regular Melody it's more lighthearted, maybe they got into a climbing competition and Melody got very into it. He might or might not be sitting at the top of a bookshelf or wall now, or maybe Melody got lucky at the arcade games for once. For hacked Melody it's less lighthearted, but it'd likely still not be gory, not by him at least. If the character is weaker/smaller than him, Melody will likely drag them to Vanny (but the "getting to Vanny" part can be skipped), and if they're on even grounds with him, he might try to ambush them, while if they're outright stronger he might lure them or give away their location for the other animatronics to deal with.


Chiyoko / Charleigh Naruhodo VictoryDrawsStuff

Spoilering this as it contains a lot of swearing, really descriptive mentions of being strangled, injured, etc and has implied death.

What the fuck?

What the actual FUCK?

How is this POSSIBLE?

Chiyoko struggled, she coughed, she sputtered as Melody would get his hands on her neck, essentially strangling her. It was painful, it was torture, it was a nightmare.

She never wanted to fight against Melody in the first place. After all, the animatronic was once a good friend. An ally, a friend, she can still remember the memories of her sitting with Melody as she pat his hair, getting her parents to get used to the friendly animatronic, the good times they shared talking to eachother and getting to know one another. It was hours ago since that happened, but the woman remembered it like it happened only a few minutes.

But now she's being strangled by who is now an enemy.

An enemy she never wanted to battle against.

Chiyoko did make an effort to raise her blade against the robot, to fight him and hopefully get him away so she can return to the others. She can hear the panicked screaming of her parents, specifically her Momma. 

His voice screaming her name, begging Melody to let him go.

"NO! MELODY! CHIYOKO! NO! LET GO OF CHIYOKO MELODY, LET GO OF CHIYOKO, SHE IS YOU'RE FRIEND! LET GO OF HER!"

She could hear the enraged shouting of her father, but what was he saying?

Chiyoko couldn't really tell anymore, as she was lacking air at this point.

She could his footsteps being heard as he tried to catch up with a Melody now dragging a Chiyoko falling into unconsciousness as she struggles to breathe, to gain enough oxygen to stay conscious, to stay aware of everything going on.

She could scream, but Melody has a tight grip on her neck. She tried to scream, she tried to say a word.

But she couldn't as if her neck had a gag on it.

She struggled to get Melody off of her, she tried to use her blade to cut him to no avail, she kicked and flailed, she tried every tactic she was taught to get herself out of the position she was in.

All were met with failure, all because she was too weak.

Before she knew it, the dragging stopped. Chiyoko could see a familiar blonde haired women wearing the Pizzaplex nightguard security uniform. 

Oh no, it's that bitch.

Her.

Who they all call Ness.

With an axe.

Ready to kill her.

Before anyone could do anything, Chiyoko was heard screaming in the most pain she has ever felt. The most agony she has ever been through. It was worse than when she had to convict her best friend of her crimes, worse than the moment that her best friend said "What I regret is being you're friend in the first place, Chiyoko."

And soon blood was leaking onto the floors below, it is now too late.

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For NP a few ideas: Perhaps Chiyoko defeated you're OC in a fight, a sword duel, perhaps in court if you're OC is a prosecutor or is the criminal trying to hide their crimes. Or maybe a debate match? Who knows, have fun! Nothing too gory though, thanks!

Kazaa S3L

claiming mwahaha

N'arfi TwizzlyTwist

(Since it’s been over a day, I’ll take this one instead.)

Somehow, a talking humanoid rabbit wasn’t the strangest thing that Chiyoko had seen in the court room and this particular rabbit had been driving over the speedlimit while his entire car was filled with food.

“State your full name sir”. Chiyoko said calmly.

“N’arfi Nongwesfv Nunh.” Luckily she wouldn’t have to repeat his full name. It was a real tonguetwister.

“Your occupation Mr Nunh?” She continued.

“Uh… freelancer? … unemployed? It varies-“ N’arfi shifted around nervously on the stand. Chiyoko asked him what he had in his car at the moment that he got pulled over. “Smoked chicken… My car was filled with smoked chicken.” He felt embarrassed to even say that.

“Why.. was your car filled with smoked chicken?” She questioned, leaning forward on her desk.

“I sell.. it? I have to make money somehow.” The viera responded, glancing at her and the judge.

“Do you have an allowance for that? Has your kitchen been certified?“ 

“what-“ He was caught off guard. “Allowance? I was just sitting on the pavement around Limsa with a portable stovetop.” He smiled nervously. “I thought this was about me speeding.”

This continued for just a few more minutes and in the end, N’arfi ended up confessing that he had been speeding, committed tax fraud and sold food without proper refrigeration or an allowance. This rabbit was going away for a while.

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Short Followup

He realised that he hit Beetle a little too hard. “i’m so sorry! I- I’m not the best healer but I could try something that might soothe your pain a little.”

He fumbles around in his pocket for a bit and pulls out a tiny notebook with different spells.

“Only if you’ll allow me, of course.”

Beetle Laguna 3ace_j

Claim! (this thread looks so fun so I'ma just try to bump it also the fact its been like 9 days smh)

Sorry if I get some things wrong! I don't really know much of Final Fantasy lore
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(Never really wrote a full on fight scene so enjoy !!) (for note Beetle goes by they/them but they also don't mind she/her)

Beetle staggered back, trying to wipe the blood from their nose. This foe was particularly hard to defeat, with his magically enhanced scythe or whatever it was, Beetle wasn't sure he's never seen such a thing like that before.

"So?" N'arfi held the weapon carefully but with ease, seems like he's sparred with way harder foes. But Beetle's pride was not gonna allow for them to be an easy defeat. Rubbing her hands together she drags her hand around the wall as she ran attempting to generate electricity to power her up. Feeling their hair rise they knew it was time to charge into the rabbit humanoid so just so happens to going to her too.

Going head first, they leap forward to land a punch on N'arfi-

N'arfi leans away ever-so slightly that they'd barely miss.
Beetle's eyes widened in surprise as another colorful shockwave poured out from the scythe, connecting with the side of their body, they flew into the ground rolling. Groaning they stayed on the ground for a while.

The ground vibrated gently beneath Beetle as N'arfi walks closer,
"We're done-"
Beetle says raising their hand over their face to stare up at N'arfi, only for him to lend a hand.

Beetle's brows raised surprised by the kind gesture, taking ahold of his hand they get up.
"Thanks"

"We should totally spar again." says the bunny, having enjoyed it.
 
"Ah- sure." a small smile curled on the side of her face, maaybe after her ribs healed, that last blow really got her bad.


Beetle likes to spar, but it can be anything silly: P


Mai 99centsoda

3ace_j pinging since it's been a while! Sorry if i botched your character ahaha, I think she's neat!

Fighting wasn't something Mai was good at. He was weak, he knew it, brittle as the tiny icicles that hung from the twigs of trees after freezing rain. Still, when he'd seen an opportunity for 'sparring lessons' advertised, he figured he could at least try it out. Wouldn't need to be saved thanks to the kindness of others. Mai approaches Beetle and bows before they begin the fight.
Beetle nods slowly in return, her eyes narrowing slightly in thought. Then, she strikes, swiping Mai off his feet in what feels like less than an instant. The boy tumbles onto his backside and groans.

"You're not even trying," Beetle snarls, hands on hips as she regards him. "You know you can't win."
Mai only shoots her an apologetic look, and pulls himself to his feet in hopes to try again. It doesn't take long before he gets knocked down again. This time, however, there are no words or insults. She just takes him by the arm and leads him away.

"Come back here once you've got some guts!" she calls after him. "I'll show you how to really fight."
Mai nods his head, bowing before her again to show his thanks. At least he knows just how poor his skills are, being knocked silly in moments by someone literally centuries his junior. It isn't much comfort but at least he has a goal to work towards now.

NP: Mai is very weak physically but has command over 'winter' weather! whatever that means for the region he's in

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Kuroko Ayame Kvroii

Why did she have to pick trivia?

Kuroko sighed, offering a defeated handshake to Ren. She fancied herself something clever, but Ren had won all 40 games of trivia she boldly challenged him to. She kept a good tempered demeanor, smiling and offering him a drink from the bar (she hoped it would make him stumble over his answers. It didn't). After all, she was aware that she had been wasting his time for a while after their agreed best two out of three, so it was only fair that she didn't get upset with him.

And it wasn't that she was bitter, no, she was surprised! How did Ren seem to know so much about every category? Sure, she figured he would know a thing or two about languages, or business, or travel, but Ren knew answers that Kuroko couldn't begin to fathom. She grinned brightly at Ren. 

"So, I guess you've been studying. I'll have to write down some of your answers to remember for next time! I know I'll beat you the next time, let's try one more round!"

And once again, the same result. Ren had the answer to every question, and Kuroko couldn't keep up.

"Aw, I guess I lost again. You must really know everything!"


@ np, you can out kuroko in a combat situation if you Really want to, but her main things are dancing/performing, and fashion, so it might be easier to come up with something for that because Kuroko doesn't really fight ;w; 

(vvv This is wonderful!! It's absolutely on point, and I really enjoyed reading this! Thank you!!)

Dr. Sotirios Athanasiadis Nuclear-Hydrangea

Kvroii (i hope is on point to your character)

After the bi-weekly punk and theater show in the Radiant Wight, the professor was outperformed by Kuroko's performance. More graceful and well done than Dr. Athanasiadis' acting in a theaterical play made by his students. "Outstanding performance" the exhausted professor praised the performer with honesty. "Your talent is quite innovative, I've never seen that kind of performance in my life time.". Dr. Athanasiadis travelled different parts of the world before, and watched operas and dances, but not Kuroko's performance. "I want to try dancing before but I am not as nimble as you"

Though, the event in the Radiant Wight is not a competition, and there are no competition in Radiant Wight. Dr. Athanasiadis gave out a bundle of fruits from the Radiant Wight's farm for free. "Because good health and wellbeing come together with great performances" handed out the bundle of fruits to Kuroko.

As people in the Radiant Wight distribute free food to the people who watched the show, the people who performed, and people who need food. Others disassembled the stage sets and lighting and Dr. Athanasiadis helped them out, and realized that the performance of the day was unique. Kuroko seems smiling at the cooperative, communal environment she is in and joined with the people giving food. "We may have different strengths, but helping each other out can be refreshing. Competitions just exhaust me." Dr. Athanasiadis said


NP: There are different ways Dr. Athanasiadis fights, either can be board games (chess or tavli), musical performance (he can play bouzouki), or a theatrical performance. If you want more intense, he is capable using a sniper rifle and knife since he used to be a sniper in a resistance group during WW2. 

He doesn't have magic nor enhanced abilities (like super speed or strength or any of those things) other than he is a vampire and a sniper in combat.

(If Dr. Athanasiadis won't click you or just his info is too long, feel free to pick anyone here instead except the antagonists because the antagonist profiles are not actually finished)

(v i might write follow up on week ends if possible)

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P-4076 LocalSnowi

Having the worst decision-making skills ever and being extremely susceptible to distraction are probably good reasons to stay away from chess, let alone speed chess, and yet here P-4076 was facing Renard with the ball in his court. Things were going surprisingly well for her at first with a decent, yet amateurish opener. And yet as much of an advantage as having the white pieces is, her resolve began to falter. 

His moves were quick and well-thought a million times over in the span of a millisecond. Hers began to seep into the 10-minute time limit she had as she began to overthink. She tapped her nail-like claws against the surface of the table as reckless move after reckless move brought the capture of her knights, then her bishops, and then half of her pawns. At this point, she considered herself lucky to still have her quee-

Nope, nevermind, he captured that one, too. Pure, unfiltered anguish was reflected in the eyes of her mask as she grasped her head in agonizing anticipation. She only had 3 minutes left on the clock; he still had 7! Her hand hovered above the chessboard. Every move she made could possibly be wrong, but nothing like a leap of faith. Closing her eyes, she moved a random rook forward. 

Then, her phone dinged in her pocket. Finally, a break from the game! Digging into her overalls pocket, she retrieved her beloved device and quickly texts back ‘losing at chess talk to u later =3’. When she looked back up, she found herself in checkmate. “Well damn,” she said out loud before getting up from her seat and slapping her palms on the table. “Okay, next time, we should code something and see who makes the better one! I’ll probably win since I was literally born to do that. =3” She was probably going to lose that one, too.

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@np coding and random useless trivia are her forte

Khadyon as-Vhalakis EternalNyx

(both Renard and P-4076 get responses :3 )

(1st Response: Renard)

Every. Single. Time.
It was a simple bet. a bet that she could finish a few bounty contracts before the young, oddly eye-drawing fencer could, a race she was so very determined to win. T'was not a matter of ego, but a matter of honor; If she couldn't beat this new challenger, would she even be fit enough to keep hunting the big names? A fair wager of a few million E-credits transferred to the victor, in any form of currency they wish, would be a suitable catalyst for her to fight. The strain of constant hunts hour in, hour out tore her apart physically, mentally, in every way shape and form comprehensible to the mind. She utilized all and everything that she could, an alien concept as she usually held herself back a decent amount. Usually, she could fight with one arm tied behind her back, but she sorely underestimated her competition. Such carelessness required a new pretense, a new thought process:
No holds barred.
Her feet pressed into the puddles as the rain poured overhead, the smell of saltwater brine on the wharf assailed her senses, the blood trail beginning to fade from the weather. Thunder cracked and shook as she barely kept up through the port warehouses. The lighthouse shone bright, coating everything in a waving yellow light. Her body ached all over, her lungs barely ran dry but cramped from the sheer distance she just bolted, in addition to the amount of fighting and wounds she had attained just moments prior. Whoever this was, they were not content on the idea of a jail cell.
She watched him round the corner to the edge of the port's catwalk, cornering himself at last. Finally, her bio-tech canceled it's processes, finally being able to rest for a split second.
"Hah... N-NOWHERE LEFT TO RUN, YOU MISERABLE FUCK!!" She shouted, livid.
As she rounded the corner, there he was. Her opponent. That blonde haired foe that she had so haplessly led her quarry to. And her quarry? Right underneath him, unconscious, restrained, secured. If this happened once, perhaps she would've let it slide. But this wasn't the first time today, no, this was the SIXTIETH. It was personal.
"Damnit... GODDAMNIT!!! HOW?! HOW DID YOU...?!"
He must've been cheating, there was NO WAY she could beat him like this! A complete shutout? Sixty to one in his favor, all in a singular day? The mere though of it enraged her further than any target had ever attempted to before. Thunder crackled with her rage-induced huffs, the rain descending on the three of them. Perhaps she was just as helpless as the figure beneath the blonde. Not only did he take down the target in the time it took her to round the corner, but he STILL looked good. Even in the rains on a wharf, he must've flourished in the sheer seething rage that exuded from every fiber of her being.
As a maritime bell rang, the constitutes of the bet concluded, Renard was the clear victor. She huffed and huffed, and the rage left her body as the rain pattered upon her shoulder. Dishonored, disappointed, exhausted, yet... pleased? Perhaps the challenge wasn't so bad. After all, he did push her to her limits, on her terms. T'was only fair he would be rewarded with what was promised.
"I admit, you've won this time, Renard! Next time, I won't let you win so easily! As for the wager, expect the money in a few days."
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(2nd response: P-4076)

One loss was enough on her ego, but two? TWO? And back to back, nonetheless! Her ego must be wallowing!
A second challenge popped up in her feed. A coding match? She knew how to code... not well, but she doesn't turn down a challenge. It's an arbitrary thing, to be humble. Best part was, she could do this at home.
Emails shot back and forth between the two, her opponent's name: P-4076. She wasn't anyone that Khadyon knew of, but a fair match is a fair match.
Terms were set, a fair match. They just had to code a website as fast as they could to fit the template.
As soon as the timer clicked down to the last minute, every muscle in her body ached from the hard work she just strained herself through, she didn't even realize she'd passed out before it was too late.
By the time she woke up, a notification blared on her transceiver. The due time had long since passed, and she hadn't even gotten a chance. It was laughable how easily she was beaten.
Quickly she typed up an email, upset that she got beaten due to her passing out, but alas, it was all said and done.
To P-4076,
I must confess that you have beaten me, despite me passing out right as we started. Expect the wager's money to come in soon.
~Khadyon as-Vhalakis.
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@ NP: Khadyon usually engages in hunting challenges, be it of bounties or particularly tough wildlife. A simple wager would be enough for her to begin.