Hey, I'm really new to all this, but I went and read through all of the info. All in all, I think it sounds really interesting, but I do have some aspects I'm not so sure about. The physical descriptions sound very interesting, though a visual aid might help there, but I like how simplistic it is over all. I may have missed it, but an explanation of dream types would be helpful aside from the trait list. I also wonder about the lifespan, if a Somni only lives as long as the person it's meant for, then how do the other types come into being? How do they last longer to do their jobs while also protecting their people? Also, how can a Somni replace another that's become an Insomni? I feel like further explanation or alterations there would be beneficial. Overall, though, I think the concept is really cool, and I'd be curious to see more.
Oh boyyy. So, I made this species a few years ago (back in 2014) and it never really got off the ground, which is fully my fault. I'd like to revamp it but I'm very well aware that it needs a lot of work and polishing in order to make it a species worth making.
So, I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism, feel free to be blunt just please refrain from flat out insulting the concept and/or saying just to scrap the idea as a whole.
Here is the un-revamped info, so this is completely unpolished and may be really cringy I haven't fully read through it myself yet lol. Feel free to skim through it/read as little of it or as much of it as you'd like. <3
Edit: Alright I've polished the info up slightly and correct the terrible grammar in the original.