i love this one sm, the time reversing is really fun and the subsequent interplay between the dialogue and prose owns. absolutely delightful final line.
[Instantly a slew of local wild predatory animals splattered into his mind, punctuated only by his careful steps backwards, as his limited options rolled like slots before him.]
also i really like this sentence for some reason. something abt it just stuck out to me. good at evoking that feeling of The Panic Lottery
I'M HAPPY TO HEAR THAT... i love writing peaches in general so i'm glad you've been enjoying his stuff. boy has easy mode powers but theyre not helping him figure out What's Really Going On rip. IM GLAD YOU LOVE THE ANIMAL LINE TOO
do you think you'll end up reading in all reflections / the progress of things? i know they're wayyyy longer so it might be. daunting. to say the least, but
10000000000000% you KNOW it!! always excited to tackle a numbers odyssey. will def take a while to chip away at once i reach those (Soon.) but i am excited to do so!! i caught the first chapter of TPOT when it came out at least so i've got a little chunk of that done, but let's be real i'll probably at least give it a skim before continuing onward. both as a refresher and also bc it is simply Good Content
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