Evelyn McKale

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Evelyn McKale

She/Her - 16 - Straight

Trivia

Birthday: August 18, 20XX
Height: 5'2 Ft
Weight: 118 Lbs

Likes

♥️ Anime
♥️ Donuts
♥️ Doodling
♥️ Animals

Dislikes

School
Listening to arguing
Exercising

Favorites

Food: Potato Chips
Drink: Dr Pepper
Color: Green
Evelyn's Palette

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Mistak's Palette

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Notes about design

  • Mistak's blush is not optional
  • Mistak's flower eyes aren't optional either
  • Mistak's blush and thick lashes aren't makeup, that's just how she looks
  • Mistak's wings are the same color as the flower petals, but are on 52%


Bio

Wish: For her parents to get along again

Magical Abilities

  • Can shoot pellet and beams out of her flower wand (flower opens to shoot)
  • Can stun people/monsters for a little by throwing a powder out of her flower wand
  • Hair can come out of braid into three strands and entangle things inside it
Evelyn was a pretty normal teenager with a rocky home life. She was an accident and considered by her parent's as a mistake. After she was born, her parent's relationship kept deteriorating until the present day, where screaming matches and high tension was an everyday occurrence. Because of this, Evelyn gets anxious over arguments and loud noises. Home was awful, and school wasn't all that great as she didn't really have any friends and didn't enjoy learning, there wasn't really anything else she had.

One night she had a terrible, vivid nightmare. It started in pitch darkness, as she watched both in her own point of view and in a different third point of view watching herself. She looked around confused, until a horse skull floated toward her slowly. It started to speak in echoes, warning her to not lose herself. Soon, the body of the horse creature started catching up, the clacks of it's hooves booming into her ears, feeling like her eardrums were shattering. Once the black body finally caught up with the last boom, it tells her Evelyn her fate, but she can't hear it due to her broken ear drums in the dream. Apparently, though, the information was so shocking, it forced her to jolt awake in a pool of sweat. Her ears were ringing slightly, but no other damage like in her dream. 

The rest of her day was pretty much normal: parents were arguing in the morning, school was boring, and she hung out for a little while after class. Once it got darker, she started to walk home. But she saw a light jumping off into an alleyway. She didn't consider her previous warnings or the dangers of following anything in the alley, instead running after it. After a couple of turns she came across a huge figure sitting in the alleyway. Evelyn was frozen in shock as the figure stared at her. "You have potential" The figure stated gruffly, it's Cheshire grin unmoving as it moved toward the girl. Evelyn squeaked in surprise, pointing at herself. The figure slowly nodded and floated over an orb. "To help others... To slay monsters... To wield powerful magic... Would you like that?" It sounded crazy, but Evelyn kind of liked the idea, though not totally convinced. The figure picked up on that, and said, "Not for free, no? You have school... And work... Very hard to balance with the life of a Magical Girl..." The term Magical Girl piqued her interest, recalling the anime she had watched over and over of the girls fighting evil. "I offer you one wish... Any wish, almost... A good trade, no?" Once Evelyn heard that she would be granted a wish, she was on board right away. Evelyn exclaimed her agreement and the figure chuckled slowly. "Yes, Magical Girl... Here is your wish..." He dropped the orb into her hands. "Whisper your wish... And swallow it." Evelyn paused and stared at the figure, but it didn't budge. So she whispered "I wish mom and dad would stop fighting and get along again" and swallowed the orb. Everything felt so warm, burning almost, as it went down her throat. She closed her eyes and swayed, close to fainting. All at once, it stopped completely, leaving behind a chilling coldness. She opened her eyes to find a white deer looking creature staring at her. She jumped back, but the figure was quick to soothe, "This is your friend... It will guide you... Through your Magical Girl career..." The deer squeaked a hello and floated around her head. As it did this, Evelyn noticed her outfit. She was awestruck, but this wasn't the last of it. The figure floated another object towards her: A pink phone. "This will help you find monsters... Contact other Magical Girls... More... Everything a Magical Girl needs" The phone was heart shaped, and flipped open, showing multitudes of app icons. "Now go..." The figure pushed Evelyn out, causing Evelyn to stumble her way out of the alley. When she looked back, it is no longer to be found. 

(This story is like a visual novel, with multiple routes and endings. I will write the true route and ending when I can, for now this is it)

Personality


  • Adventurous
  • Alert
  • Creative
  • Daring
  • Kind
  • Protective
  • Hopeful
  • Trusting
  • Boyish
  • Clumsy
  • Lazy
  • Weak

Relationships


- Mom and Dad -

Before the Wish they barely noticed her, and when they did, it was to be passive aggressive about something they didn't like. After the wish, they were much better, but were still sort of neglectful. She loves them much more now.

- DEER -
She thinks it's a little weird, but likes it at first. As it goes on however, she starts to resent it for it's nonchalant enjoyment of her and the other Magical Girl's suffering
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- (TBN) -
She is the first Magical Girl she meets, and is a part of her Magical Girl team. She thinks (TBN) is really nice and looks up to her as a veteran Magical Girl. She is horrified of her after learning the Magical Girl Secret
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- (TBN) -
Evelyn pities her greatly, and feels a little awkward around her, as she speaks so little and is shy. However later on, she finds her to be a great asset and a comfort during it all
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- HACKER -
Evelyn is scared shitless of her, as she is a cruel magical girl who enjoys the pain of other girls. The two are rivals, unbeknownst to Evelyn
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