Appearance 

[] They have a rare hair/fur color 

no

[] Their eyes are an unusual color 

idk

[] Their eyes change color 

idk

[1x] The eye color happens to be Red

not uncommon in his universe

[] They are very muscular

hes the opposite lol

[2x] They have lots of friends/no friends

barely any friends

[3x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet 

hes a god so he can create strange creatures

[4x] Some part of their body glows

oh no

[] They are emo/cutesy 

idk

[5x] They have wings 

yes bc hes a dragon

Subtotal: 5

Relations

Subtotal: 0

0+5 = 5

Race/Species

[1x] They are a mythical creature

very common in his universe

[2x] They are the last of their kind 

hes the only one of his kind

all gods are unique

Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens

Subtotal: 2

2+5=7

Powers

[1x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

cryokinetic

[2x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/ect

kinda? he is a god after all

[3x] They have a special ability/power

yes? all gods are like this and the mortal average joe has powers too

[4x] They are immortal

all gods are immortal

[5x] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 

god of death and ruler of the underworld so yes

[6x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

same as above and bc he is a ghost

[7x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

feared for being Death, which is understandable and this is never portrayed as unreasonable

Subtotal: 7

7+7=14

Mentality

[1x] They are very intelligent 

all gods are very intelligent

[2x] They are very mysterious/dark

yes he is even literally darkness

[3x] They are very patient 

yes bc hes somewhat laid back bc so lazy

can be very impatient about certain things tho

Subtotal: 3

14+3=17

Miscellaneous

[] They are physically strong

compared to average mortals yes, compared to other gods, not at all

[1x] They are connected with a certain element

this is an extremely common thing in his universe

the average joe will have either this trait or be able to use all elements

[2x] They are connected with a certain animal

in symbolism

Subtotal: 2

Total: 17+2 = 19

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[1x] They have a short temper 

hes patient but also irritable

[2x] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless 

may seem this way but then u can easily tell this is not the case bc of how he talks

[2.5x] They are unattractive

idk hes considered to be very beautiful in appearance only, he is painfully obviously Death (not appearance wise but the aura about him), gives off ominous vibes, and the combination of all these things make him seem simultaneously beautiful (only from his appearance) and frightening/ugly

this is something that makes him more complex than not

half point

Total Reduction: 

2.5

19-2=17

17-.5=16.5

<5 -Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a fascinating and exciting character, but generally, if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 -Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue

You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people. 

26> -Mary-Sue

of lophius

Appearance 

[] They have a rare hair/fur color 

not really?

[] Their eyes are an unusual color 

idk

[] Their eyes change color 

no

[1x] Some part of their body glows

yes but it makes sense

[2x] They have wings 

bc shes a dragon

Subtotal: 2

Relations

got 0 for this

Race/Species

[1x] They are a mythical creature

they arent uncommon in her universe

Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens

Subtotal: 1

1 + 2 = 3

Powers

[1x] They have a special ability/power

bc shes a dragon

[] But they don't know about it yet 

[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

Subtotal: 1

3+1=4

Mentality

[1x] They have a mental disorder 

autistic bc self insert

[2x] They are very intelligent 

[3x] They are very lively/happy

[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly 

[] They are very patient 

Subtotal: 3

4+3=7

Miscellaneous

[] They are physically strong

idk

[]  They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I  would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend'  'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate  to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these  beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to  others, then we have a problem.

[] They have a rare/unusual name
idk

[1x] They are connected with a certain element

this is considered normal in her world

[] They are connected with a certain animal

Subtotal:  1

Total: 8

7+1=8

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke

[] They are an alcoholic 

[] They are overweight

[] They are addicted to drugs 

[] They have a short temper 

[] They enjoy bullying others 

[] They do not care much about others

[] They are emotionless 

[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way

[] They are unattractive

Total Reduction: 0

<5 -Anti-Sue

Your  character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character  scoring this low can't be a fascinating and exciting character, but  generally, if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them  up' a bit.

6-15 -Balanced Character

If  your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a  well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end  of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue

You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people. 

26> -Mary-Sue