in need of a quick critique!

Posted 6 years, 2 months ago (Edited 6 years, 2 months ago) by hsin

Ignore! It's being printed now so there's no turning back ;u;


Apologies if this is not the right forum to post this is. I thought it was the most fitting, but if there's another place I should but it, let me know!

I have an art project due tomorrow for a competition that my school is doing. Tbh I'm not trying to win anything, but I already signed up so I have to do it. I made this

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I know it's not perfect! I just wanna get it done. Is there any quick things that I could fix?


I have to print it tonight, so I don't have a ton of time. Thanks in advance!

MagatamaSnap

The most notorious things i can gather are the finger size and the grass reflection on the skin being too bright (? maybe i'm just neetpicking in this one but a little less color or saturation would fix it) for the shadows you can use a more purple-ish or brick-red color to give it a little more dept.
In other things i just think it looks amazing! i like it a lot!

Good job on your competition!

hsin

MagatamaSnap Thank you!