KimYoung Joven's Comments

Checking the mail, you find a prominent green envelope with a mystical metallic sheen. It was clearly addressed to you with your name and address in a refined cursive handwriting. Golden leaves and vine motifs were embossed on the face of the envelope and a pawprint stamped in black ink sealed the flap of the envelope shut. Opening it, a fancy yellow paper could be found along with a pin decorated with a wisteria flower.

The paper, in neat handwriting, read...

Dear Mx. KimYoung Joven,

Hello and welcome to the Beacon Company! We're very delighted to have you joining us for this journey.
Here's your company-issued ID number along with your DTV number! Your ID photo will come shortly!

Beacon ID#: 0033
DTV ID#: 0033

Congratulations and welcome again!

- Cry and the Beacon Co.

- You may submit your character to the TH world, now!

CafePhantasia_Staff

Hey there! Your app is on fire! as in it's smokin, as in it's hot, as in, we really liked what we saw! There's just a few tiny notes before we can accept this belieber. Check out the link below to see what needs fixing, and if you need any help, feel free to boop a mod and we'll lend a hand! <3

Critique link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O_OdjltwaPoTWD4IFOt336v6XPmwNgOoFFaA2KIZf60/edit?usp=sharing

Respond to this to let us know once you've got the changes made and then KimYoung will get to join the club!

Lunaovercows

Hopefully this fire app doesn't cause an explosion u_u

I've made the changes according to the critique and would like the shield to be reviewed to make sure it's clear for future reference.

I owe you 50 nums