Cotton Candy's Comments


Okay I am in love with her design??? She's so cute!

Id say id use her as part of the main campaign of my story, she looks like she'd go really well in one of the big city, possibly working as a fashionesta or a designer perhaps even a hair stylist? I think her design gives her the kind of vibes where should shouldn't be a direct antagonist to the adventurers although she is definitely trying to make their life a little harder. 

I'm getting mega rich girl vibes and I think she could play quite a unique role, one that isn't already filled by one of my characters where she's a mix of an antagonist/supporting character to them. She definitely looks like when they first meet she's kind of a bitch with the whole "im better than you" kind of vibe, although as the adventurers spend more time in that city it eventually leads to her having to save them in a massive personality twist, showing her emotional development as a character, potentially even being the reason they manage to escape from the city in the first place 

Right okay as I was talking about her being the whole reason they escape from the city, I'm now thinking this city may be a literal definition of a tourist trap, its whole reason is a scam to lul adventurers into buying overpriced materials and no matter how much they try to escape theyre always sent straight back to the city centre. This wasn't her first choice of city but hell, at least her buisness sells. She disconnected her feels about being a part of this city long ago but seeing a group manage to avoid most of the scams and only really needing someone to show them the way, it gives her a new heart, telling them to go through what looks like a fake alley or something similar to actually escape the city. 

Sorry if I wrote too much, she really sparked some much needed creativity 

Shoot, I just reread your thing and I realised I didn't really state what I'd use her for and instead just developed her character a little, sorry 👉👈 Not only will they be on the main story im writing but she would also get her own stories/comics to show her POV, both while the adventurers are in the city and her backstory, I think it could really tug on some heart strings if I give her the starvjg artist prequel before eventually showing her to be what she becomes when the adventurers (and by extension, the readers) first meet them. 

Sorry if I rambled for too long, thank you for the chance 👉👈

It's ok, the story was a part of what I was looking for too^^ Just gimme some time to process it all and for me to hear what other people's plans for her are.

Okay! Thank you! ^-^

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Hi! I just thought I'd let you know that she's been given a new home, i always get quite sad when I'm not told cuz then I'm waiting and then I check on her one day and the character already has a new home