Amaya sounds like a really interesting character! I'm a sucker for stoic characters, and her personality is writen so well its life-like! Its great that you've not only given her a defined character with strengths and unique points, but also how they may affect her in life and present as negatives - it makes her human!
I also love how you've written the physical description section. You havent just listed random traits, you've linked it back to her personality and it gives a really nice picture of her!
And of course a wonderful design, she has fabulous hair :O
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