Ok first I LOVE the amount of detail put into the world! It's clear that there's a ton of thought & effort put in, & the concept itself is so cool n unique!! Its rly enjoyable to read & sets up a bunch already

& Stella is so interesting! I really like how she achieves her dream but then finds out its not all it seems to be, it's such a neat setup with tons of potential 

Also her design?? Is so CUTE?? It fits with her character tbh, & its just. rly nice to look at!