I hope this doesn't come off as rude, but as someone who deals with suicidal thoughts a lot, this OC doesn't really make it any better. It needs a lot more research put into it so it doesn't come off as insensitive and offensive. You can't just sing a song and make a suicidal person suddenly think that there's a reason to continue. There's also numerous grammatical errors that should be fixed, and I'm always here if you want any help.
sorry im now just responding, I didn't see this message until now, but I really wanna address this, keep in mind this also comes from someone who deals with suicidal thoughts
she uses MAGIC. she isn't just singing but her songs are enchanted, she's essentially using a magic spell to stop someone from ending their life
im sorry you take offense, but theirs nothing really offensive here, if this was along the lines of "just sing to a person to cure depression" that be different, but its not.
ignoring the fact that this character is a magic user, she's litterly based on the fact that, when im in a dark state of mind music often calms me down and comforts me
just becuase you deal with suicidal thoughts one way, doesn't mean everyone else will act the same. those with mental illnesses don't always act the same to eachother, please keep this in mind in the future
as for my spelling- sorry i'll try and fix that, damn dyslexia at it again
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