art style help

Posted 1 month, 24 days ago by Hype206

im trying to experiment outside of my regular cartoony art style but idk something just looks off so i need criticism lol i think it's the face??
i redrew an artwork with my experimental art style for comparison

original:

experimental:

thank you in advance for all the help 🙏🙏🙏

Comments

avedo

You artists scare me sometimes,

I worry about you Hype206

Hype206

oh you definitely should worry about me idk if you knew about my scratch account but i post horrifying things on there no please don't check it

avedo

The scratch account histories some of my friends have js insane

seraphimstars

you know its good when you can't tell the truth apart from the joke 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🗣️🗣️🔥🥶🥶

Hype206

i shouldve drawn myself more east asian coded and given myself white skin

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Hype206

ITS NOT SUPPOSED TO BE GOOD NOEOO

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Hype206

38 minutes

Coasty_Vic

Mildly cursed /hj

Hype206

yeah im cursed with being too good at art flips hair twirls around winks blows kiss

Coasty_Vic

NDIFBFUD jokes aside that is good ass rendering

Hype206

HELL NAW

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Hype206

LMFAO WHAY???@?@??

dazey-the-goat

i mean it's great but i dissaprove the new one, you forgot the shark shoes

Hype206

i mean the whole reason why i decided to experiment outside my cartoon style is be cause its to unserious................ i wan too be taken seriously and shark shoos are to unserios :cry:

BUSKLEY

Dude the rendering is fire !! 😍😍😍

Hype206

thankk yoyuuu 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

BUSKLEY

Also ur music taste is so nice same as mine 🤫🧏‍♀️🧏‍♀️🧏‍♀️🧏‍♀️🧏‍♀️🧏‍♀️🥺🥺😝😝😜🤪🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😘😘

Hype206

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fellow whimper audio titkok edit fan... hi....

fishkid

i dislike both styles grrrgrggrrggrgg

Hype206

YOUR THE THIRD MEANIE I HAVE ENCOUTNERED TDY. I HATE THE INTERNET. I AM SELLING MY COMPUTER ANDF USING THE MONEY TO BUY BILLBOARDS AROUND THE WORLD TO PUBLICLY SHAME YOU AND THE OTHER TWO.

fishkid

the whole nation will disapprove of you *shakes head*

/j

Koshie

Both suck, quit art right now

Hype206

I am including you in the PSA post along with Flifo.

Koshie

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Hype206

Flifo, that was quite disrespectful of you. All I'm asking for here is CONSTRUCTIVE critique, not hateful remarks. I am typing a Google document on your unmannerly, discourteous, uncivil, impolite, vulgar, insulting, rude, derogatory, displeasing, ABUSIVE behavior. After the document is made public, you will suffer the consequences of your actions. I am coming for you, Flifo.