OK, SO... This guy's really interesting! His profile was actually VERY enjoyable to read. There were a lot of twists, turns, and unexpected things even just in this profile, I can just imagine how good a real full-length story would be. I think the nature of his powers, being very scary and threatening both visually and conceptually, is super cool and actually fits his character quite well, and I DO love his dynamic with both his mentor and Sakumi, how he had genuine bonds with them in different ways, and Mirrando ended up breaking his trust in the worst way possible, while Sakumi managed to become a valuable partner. I was actually very nicely surprised by how realistic his grief over killing Mirrando seems, the way it was impulsive and immediately regretted and he still holds affection towards him, actually grieving him. That was a HUGE highlight to me. It's also interesting how even though his current situation is bad, it's being faced with a now positive outlook!