Posted a thing I originally wrote back in September. This ones about Inez getting artists block.
I’ve been posting more of my writing lately, so I figured I would start a running thread for whenever I post something new since I’ve seen other people do this. This will also serve as a hub for questions, feedback, and recommendations related to the stuff I write. Just don’t be too harsh I’m not 100% used to taking critique yet.
Stuff I have posted as of now.
Status: Writing new stuff, currently focusing on shorter things because I’m a bit low on energy. I entered something (not available here yet) into a writing contest. Also I’ve outlined all my big projects and may start writing the shortest of them (a novella) this summer or sometime during the last week of school.
Yet another thing I wrote back in September. This one is about Flint taking care of a sick Renevir. Also it’s 3k words long what was past me doing 😭.
Posted another thing I wrote in September (this is literally the last one I swear). This one’s focused on Violet and Inez’s friendship/frenemyship. Please read the cws.
Posted a thing I wrote like a couple weeks ago. This one’s about Flint getting sensory overload, and it totally wasn’t inspired by my classmates being too damn LOUD.
Posted a thing I wrote like 1.5-2 weeks ago. This one features Inez and Neyah as kids, doing kid things, but it also has potentially triggering content so read the warnings.
Posted another thing. This time it’s an experimental first person letter/journal entry from Violet’s POV. It’s addressed to Neyah so it takes place in the future.
Posted another thing finally. This time it’s about Chrona killing a scientist to fix the timeline. Not sure if it counts as mild or explicit violence so I marked it as explicit.
Posted a thing. This one’s about Violet waking up in the middle of the night due to issues™️.
Posted a thing, basically part 1 of 2 but both can be read in any order once the other is posted like next week. This parts about Lumi getting up for water but collapsing due to malnutrition. CW for a described eating disorder and mentioned child neglect.
Posted the part 2/companion story of “Pretending For Your Sake”. This is Darkurra’s POV, first part rehashes the dialogue sequence in part one from her eyes, but the rest is new. Same CWs as the previous thing.
Posted a new drabble. This one’s about Flint not being able to get out of bed because Renevir’s being clingy.
I havent had time to read them all yet(having to research for a history seminar) but can i just say i LOVEE your drable about flint having trouble getting out of bed? I really enjoy your descriptions, they remind me of how i feel in the morning! They encapsulate that feeling great!
No criticism for now because i only have a little time, but i am honestly shocked no one’s commentes on your work before! Your spelling and grammar is perfectly polished, and your use of pov isn’t bad either!
I usually like stuff with different tonal content, but there’s nothing wrong with this at all, not even copyediting-wise. It’s actually really refreshingly good. I admire you and your writing and the interesting worldbuilding of Earitei on your profile. It’s boggling my brain why people haven’t read more of this stuff because it’s just real neat. Bless!!
Ooh my goodness, i have just read the one about flint’s sensory overload.. i get the feeling of forcing yourself to wait just a little longer! Renevir‘s lovely communication throughout the whole thing was touching (though tbh, also what every person should know to do) i really enjoyed it as an autistic guy