Topaz Adult App

Posted 3 years, 8 months ago (Edited 3 years, 8 months ago) by SarahWere

Tracker: https://toyhou.se/~bulletins/159467.astrolyte-tracker

Grow Up Image: https://f2.toyhou.se/file/f2-toyhou-se/images/29364239_rlL6B7bqcUy46W2.jpg


Name: Topaz

Approval Image: https://www.deviantart.com/sarahjanematthee/art/Astrolytes-Topaz-App-829781516

Body Type: Biped

Body Style: Raptor


Upgrades:
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Head Fluff
Bunbun ears
Body Fluff
Accessory
Finger Hooves
Cloven hooves
Slicker's tail
Tail Fluff
Spots
Blend
Horn Removal
Pride Tail Tip
Tiny Back Wings


Image Requirements:

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1. https://www.deviantart.com/sarahjanematthee/art/Astrolytes-Show-your-Pride-844634940

2. https://www.deviantart.com/sarahjanematthee/art/Astrolytes-Topaz-Ref-Sheet-837070812

3. https://www.deviantart.com/sarahjanematthee/art/Astrolytes-Bunny-Buds-840548856



Magic Approval Comment: https://toyhou.se/~comments/4458448

GrimGummies

Topaz is looking great so far! There are just a few things that need to be fixed before she can be approved:
- Her legs appear to be too short for the raptor stance and need to be lengthened!
- Her colours appear to be different from those used on her approval. Please adjust the colours!
- Remember to link your tracker on your forum post!

Other than that, everything else looks fine! Please reply once you've made these changes.

squidslugs

Hate to add on but two other things i noticed!

- Their upgrade list doesn't seem to match the upgrades in the image!

- Their magic approval comment seems to link to the magic roster applications bulletin as a whole, not the specific comment.

SarahWere

You didn't list anything specific so I assume it was the tiny wings that I forgot to add? I added it in now though.


I didn't previously didn't know how to link the comment but after poking around I figured out how so I linked just the comment.

squidslugs

Looking at the lyte, you are also missing horn removal! Once thats added, you should be fine for the upgrades.

SarahWere

Fixed, sorry about that.

SarahWere

Right, I went and made her legs longer.


I linked the tracker now too.


But I am unable to edit her colors. I have trouble with color dropping and always when I eyedrop a color it ends up being a different hue or shade and since she is grey it visually doesn't make much difference to me unless I compare the colors side by side.

If it absolutely has to be edited I would have to ask a stranger to do it and thats not fair to them.

In future images I can try and get the same colors as on her app though.

(but once approved I will be changing her colors anyways so there is no real point.)

GrimGummies

Thank you for making these changes!

If you absolutely cannot colour drop the original colours then it's understandable. I can let it slide.

So they're approved on my part! I'm unsure if I should wait for squidslugs to reply first but it seems you've made the changes they've requested too.

Go ahead and link this post to their tracker as their adult approval!

SarahWere

Okay! Thank you! :>