Well, I only read the first chapter but I like the main character, Nathaniel! I like seeing his thought process and hearing his voice throughout the story, it gives me an idea of what kind of person he is and I get good immersion with how his feelings are written out. I can also sympathize with his struggles from when I was his age, so he's pretty relatable! Looking forward to reading the rest!
I don't think it has to be a literature I wrote, so I'm posting one I commissioned