Fav Line In The Above Oc’s Profile V.2

“Keegan saw it happen in the blink of an eye and ran towards his dad in an effort to save him, but the damage had been done.”

not just this line, but more specifically the rest of that section in the bio as well really stood out to me a lot; i found it really interesting yet so heartbreaking how the loss of his father happened to him at all, but also how it tied into most of everything else that is relevant to him, including still wanting to please his father, and how that tied into the relatability with someone else who had the same experience but ended up betraying him in the end

"he has a huge tendency to pick on people based off of factors that he is insecure about himself; he picks on people for being “ugly” because he hates the way he looks himself; he has picked on people for being “not masculine enough” as he struggles with his own masculinity"

This caught my eyes quite well. It's well written and let's you see further into Malachi as a character! Saying this as someone who had experienced and met ton of people like him irl, it's interesting to see a character with this kinda traits; it's a dark aspect but you executed it in a rlly nice way here- would love to see how he further develops in the future :3

"bai carries around a heavy purple hammer that they like using to smash stuff and as their main weapon"

my brain went "Kuru Kuru Kururin" That meme has consumed me, I imagine that they smash something in the most cartoony way possible with the curve of the art and effect with a "BONK" sound effect then piece sign to the audience with a bright smile

“I KNOW YOU'RE HURT, I'M SORRY”

i know, i know, it’s the first quote at the bio and i read the whole thing i promise :’D BUT it genuinely is an interesting quote. i read in her backstory and so far it’s actually quite wholesome, except the ending of course. seeing that quote at the very top does make me wonder… what does it mean? does this explains her feelings about her having to “leave her family”/pass away? or is there something more going on that we as an audience have yet to discover? either way, this story here has plenty of things that i’m curious about! also irrevelant but she’s very pretty :O

np can pick anyone in this link! pick whoever interests you :]

went for maisey posey!

Despite being nice, she may not be the wisest. Maisy is someone who’s “too upbeat” on some note. A girl who often sees the world with rose-tinted glasses, Maisy believes that all one should do is to stay positive and happy to solve problems. She’s not best at reading the room either, as she often wouldn’t realize a problem at all or even assume that certain people around her are happy and doing well.

i have a soft spot for this specific flaw in characters: optimistic and caring, but too much to the point toxic positivity can be a bit of a problem (when this is done right, of course). that, and maisey is just so cute ;; i also liked the first quote in her bio, but i didn't wanna pick something that starts at the beginning of the bio, sooooo

"Deep down, he does want friends, it's just that he has a hard time connecting with others. He is also actually a nice man once you get to know him- if somewhat eccentric. Whenever the topic of robotics is brought up, Enigma will appear more interested and elated."

Just by reading this part, it just makes me feel bad for the guy. It just gives me the impression that he just y know is a loner. It really sucks for a guy like him to have zero friends.. I'm probably getting the feeling that he wants to feel some sort of love and to be loved (not romantic love, I'm saying like love you would expect from a friend).

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NP: if you don't want to do Galveston, you can do Kong-Rey I guess

"-so before he ran off, he told Galveston that he is king now, not giving him any explanation at all."

Damn, imagine waking up after getting murdered and next thing you know, you're a king, now.

"Talks like either a pretentious poet or a cheery murderer"

That's such a great way to describe someone's speech pattern HAHAHA I can already vividly hear what she must sound like

⬇️ Asteria is ABSOLUTELY a gremlin HAHAJSHDJDDK she just happens to know things

"Asteria seems to love the sound of her own voice. She's the kind of person who can never seem to shut up." 

Im so sorry this is honestly such a funny way to start off her personality description. It kinda makes you expect her to be some annoying person no one can stand but the fact that the next line completely debunks that gives it a pretty funny contrast lmao.

Also ik i should only choose one line but i cant not include "She's no stranger to tricks, pranks, and all manner of bamboozlery." It makes her sound like such a gremlin compared to how shes supposed to be well spoken and knowledgeable agdjhajd

« All attempts of people trying to get to know him more have failed, and oftentimes interactions with him promptly end with him grumbling and walking away. »

(Ignore the weird quotes I’m too lazy to change it from French to English rn)

I think this really captures the eerie vibe you have going for Kolya, almost like the world wants to know their existence but they themselves don’t. It’s kind of somber, but at the same time you can’t feel too bad for him since they themselves end all forms of contact.

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NP, feel free to do anyone else if Max is too heavy in terms of backstory

Max is too kind perhaps, everyone knows being too cruel brings you nowhere, but being too gentle means you get stepped on. And Max always gets stepped on. He's entered his fair share of toxic relationships and often blames himself for things that aren't his fault.

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I nearly relate to this myself actually! I usually go gentle on people. But I’m also not afraid to be more pushy if all else fails. And I have had people wrong me before.

"Though the Vleubergs’ business had an Instagram and YouTube presence before Claire came along, Ruben rarely posted on it and his social media skills were poor."

It makes it seem like Ruben was either withdrawn for some reason or was not as 'savvy' due to being a product of his time? Hiring a person to manage their social media presence would be more of a difficulty than benefit in some chance, further. It has a degree of realism to it as a line, without outright stating fact.

Next poster: IC can work, or anyone with info in this folder.

Appears diligent with her efforts, not with intended harm, although chaos can result from different directions.

it gives a nice insight to the kind of person she is. she’s well-meaning, but sometimes she goofs up a bit. just a silly goofy ghost! surely nothing bad had happened 

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@np either p-4076 with her shiny new profile or anyone from this folder

You only live once, after all, so why not enjoy the life you have?

I don't need to look far to find my favorite line. This right here is one of the truest lines I've read, and it is a good philosophy to describe a character with.
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@ NP: IC can work, or there's also these three if Khadyon doesn't pique your interest:
https://toyhou.se/23407607.calypso
https://toyhou.se/19536077.nayru
https://toyhou.se/19536104.nox

“By her friends, she's described as confident, fun, athletic, honorable, caring, and dilligent; like a long-lost big sister that they never knew they needed. To her targets, she's infamously known for being borderline psychotic, ruthless, bloodthirsty, and intimidating“

I always adore seeing characters that yield different opinions from different audiences! Here you can really peek into the character’s personality and see how “fake” or “real” she is, it’s an illusion almost, the information regarding her seems to be always true yet different. I really did enjoy reading about her, she doesn’t seem truly evil as this seems to be her job, but she is a bit sadistic it seems. Super awesome character, keep up the wonderful work!

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He was motherless for most of his life and his aunt was horrible at cooking. Poor guy lived an entire life of munching on fast food XD