the shape of the wings will depend on what kinda bird u base them on but here's something
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options. go nuts on whatever u reckon.
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swag thank you!
I know there have been similar games, but I wanted to make this specific one!
Instead of showing your whole gallery or recent art, pick one piece in particular ^w^
While redlining & critiquing the art piece of the person above
I'll try to stay on top of moderation- if someone doesn't finish their claim do let me know and I'll handle it!
RULES:
1. Keep it NICE! always offer compliments alongside the criticism
2. Finish claim within 2 weeks, if you can't then feel free to message me and let me know
3. No sexual images or intense gore- artistic nudity and mild injuries are ok though!
4. Remember only one image can be done at a time; You can give options for the person below to pick from, but ultimately only one will be critiqued.
5. It doesn't have to be a fullbody redline, even just small parts or tips are ok
6. That's all! <3
Examples of a redline can be seen below (click on them for source)
I have some art below of mine, pick whichever one you prefer~
Cruxian claim!
this is what I noticed hope it helps! ^_^
I think the pose isn't clear enough and lacks a rhythm, if he's taking a step he should be leaning forward a bit more for example.
here for you to dismantle ＾▽＾）
(NOT CLAIMING)
just a reminder; offer positive feedback alongside the critique ^u^
it's a kind way to help the artist understand something they're doing well
Scared_Gekko I decided to claim actually!
Initially avoided it because my grasp on humans isn't the best but, eh why not?
I went ahead and critiqued the lute image, focusing on pose/dimension
First I focused on body, then a separate one for the lute (didn't want all my lines overlapping lol)
I changed the leg position to fit the idea of 'leaning back against invisible wall' thing- but I think your pose works well even just as a character floating in space :b
and NOW, below I'll post some pics of mine that feel off.. plz help me
or tbh, if you want to skip feel free, I just want this thread to survive haha
EDIT: thank you so much, that is wicked helpful! <33
