Hii, saw u posted this from the fruity friends discord, figured I'd comment on here rather than there, but if u don't like comments attached to your lits feel free to delete this lol.
Went into this completely blind so idk what's going on, but your prose is very pretty!
this was a very sweet detail that I enjoyed "Goodnight," Erasmus whispered. Although he knew Lysandar no longer truly slept, Erasmus still waited until he deemed it an appropriate amount of time for one to have fallen asleep before he wandering off. It only felt polite to do so.
This bit was also sweet and some delightful dialogue <3 Lysandar momentarily opened an eye to admire Erasmus's handiwork. He chuckled. "Dressing me like it's my funeral."
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