I'm not that great with critiques so I hope you dont mind me just gushing a little lol. "Oberon is a vampire and an alchemist and according to him-the smartest being in the world. And the most awesome. The prettiest too" Gotta love some ~confidence~! I really liked this as a way to start his bio/profile. Imo it goes very well with 'full time idiot' I wheezed. I also wheezed at how his idiocy inducing ego is something of an achievement.
One thing that stood out to mei's that he is a baby mm life who lives near a volcano??? That's super creative imo and I think that this is a one of a kind concept and I'm totally here for it!
Also dig the vampire alchemist concept and the little late that he is good at making soda volcanos. Another thing I enjoyed is that his fun facts/extra notes Howell with his personality; things like lying about playing the violin is vet on point for someone with an ego like that.
Overall think that you have a well rounded and fun OC and I really enjoyed reading about him.
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