Elliott M.'s Comments


Checking the mail, you find a prominent green envelope with a mystical metallic sheen. It was clearly addressed to you with your name and address in a refined cursive handwriting. Golden leaves and vine motifs were embossed on the face of the envelope and a pawprint stamped in black ink sealed the flap of the envelope shut. Opening it, a fancy yellow paper could be found along with a pin decorated with a wisteria flower.

The paper, in neat handwriting, read...

Dear Mr. Elliott Murphy,

Hello and welcome to the Beacon Company! We're very delighted to have you joining us for this journey.
Here's your company-issued ID number along with your DTV number! Your ID photo will come shortly!

  • Beacon ID#: 0037
  • DTV ID#: 0037

Congratulations and welcome again!
     - Cry and the Beacon Co.


- You may submit your character to the TH world, now!

aidenopossum
Elliott looks purrfect so far, we're excited to see him in Beacon! 

The second join question is incorrect, and there's some small errors with his DTV's spells, which you can find critiqued in the link below. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BbaIXal_P91Z1VqGCwBRA_em1sM1LG9I8VIjmUdsNMQ/edit?usp=sharing 

Simply respond with the correct answer for the second join question (found here) after you've edited the spells, and we can go ahead and accept him!!

I edited his DTV’s spells and I think everything should be in order now!

The correct answer is 2 warnings = 1 strike.