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I would critique but honestly I can't really see anything "wrong" with it or specifically needs improving, ur art and designs are great! only thing is maybe the colored lines should be darker on the mouth so you can see it better? but generally i love the colored lines
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i would love to give a critique but i feel like i would just be going into personal bias' for this, you have a unique art style thats fitting to you and its pleasing to look at. i could be nitpicky with anatomy but i think what you have is fun. the hair in the bigger drawing feels flat compared to the rest due to a lack of shading but the rest of the body also doesnt have that, i could be due from the linework, while the whole body gives a 3d sort of feel, you can see curves and such its harder for the hair due to it being one solid color, but thats also due to just how the style is since the full body is a flat. again i dont think theres much that could be criticized here, your art is wonderful and your use of color is fantastic.
Faved and ready subbed! I adore this design so I'm gonna struggle with critiquing it but I'll try my best. The head seems like you were going for a dog or a deer rather than a horse or unicorn, though I'm honestly fine with that. The tail feels off though it's probably just the fact the linart is very hard to see, so it's hard to see the exact mechanisms for it. Other than that I just recommend having some sort of open mouth guide on the ref because it's really helpful to have. Though honestly, you're several leagues above where I am in my art and designs so take my criticism with a grain of salt.
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for critics, your artstyle and anatomy are really lovely, but I have to agree with others that the lineart needs to be a different colour when in darker places. The legs and tail’s lineart get lost because it’s all black. The mouth is also kind of hard to see, and if something like the fingers were black it would just look like a dark blob. The pupil of the eye is also dark enough to almost blend in with the skin. I think changing some of the lineart to white or lightening the colours would help out. :)
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as for art critiques, my main suggestion is doing things out of your comfort zone! push the poses you draw to extremes and try ones you wouldnt normally, use different color pallettes, line weight, all that good stuff. different art styles too! also big one, try drawing more diverse body types and facial features! i know thats something a lot of people commonly struggle with so theres no shame in it, its just a really good thing to work on for a lotta reasons 🫶
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Honestly I don't know what to critique your art is so pretty but also like cool? I guess maybe more poppy colours. And maybe even more poses cause you're super good with them. I always encourage going out of comfort zones and trying something new so maybe some style changes? Or even like even crazier species!!
Anyways I love your art and designs so much!
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