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City life in the 70's was a relatively simple time, people going back and fourth focusing on things with their life. At night though, the streets would come to life with flashing lights and neon signs, advertising the various disco and night clubs that dotted the street awaiting entries. There was one specific one in town that was quite popular and garnered the crowd. Walking down the street, dressed in her outfit for the night, a red T-rex kept a regal pose, but deep down she was feeling antsy as she eyed the buildings alongside her looking for a specific one. She had made plans with a few other friends of hers to meet up at a rather newly opened dance club that focused mainly on the "Disco" theme.

As she kept walking down the street, in the distance the T-rex could see the night club getting closer and closer. Music could faintly be heard blasting from inside, and with the sounds of people having fun and flashing lights no doubt a party was already in full swing. She hurried to the entrance, heart race accelerating in excitement. As soon as she stepped through the doors, the energy of the other various people there could be felt energizing her. A few quick glances around the area, no sight of the friends that she was suppose to meet here. They probably were off having their own time, but it was fine. She could always call them later,but for now she could feel the pull of the dance floor drawing her in.

Avoiding the others, there was it. A empty spot in the center, big enough for her. The female T-rex made her way through, and as soon as she stood in the area, the beat of the music reverberated through her feet. Finally, this was it. She tapped her foot, and it wasn't long until she was in full swing. The T-rex danced around in her area, Her tail slapped on the ground to the beat as she twirled around and wiggled her body, not noticing that she was starting to catch eyes from others, the group there spanning out to give her new room as they were hypnotized. Whoever this stranger was they thought, she was beautiful.

It was only when the song playing stopped, did the T-rex cease as well and finally take the time to look around her. It was silent for a couple seconds, but then there was cheering and praise. Instead of feeling awkward, this only boosted her mood and she smiled and waved. The next song finally started up, but instead of everyone dancing, all eyes were on her. As if waiting for her command. Shrugging, the T-rex looked them all. "Let's finish this!" She shouted, and the crowd cheered with her as the dance party went back to full bloom, with her being the center of attention.

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It continued far into the night, her taking breaks of course for things such as drinking water and resting. The crowd slowly thinned out as well, until there was only about 20 or so left. She was leaning against her seat, exhausted but in high spirits and boastful. Her friends FINALLY found her, and one of them asked if she was ok. The T-rex simply nodded to her friends, a big smile still plastered on her face as she began going off about how fun of a night she had, grabbing an offered hand as she stood up her legs a little wobbly. Her friends laughed, and with their assistance the trio walked out of the club. "Can we come here next weekend, guys?" They nodded. Soon, the dance floor would be hers again. But for now, a rest was in order.

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I'm not good at writing short stories but I'll give it a shot!...


The crowd goes wild! Screaming and hollering, clapping their hands and stomping their feet along with the beet of the music. "Dino-mite! Dino-mite!." 

Smiling contently she gives another big twirl and points her hands to the sky. She enjoyed 70s night at the club, and every Thursday the crowd just ate her up as she danced to the music. Her wig going to and fro with her movements as she lost herself to the music. "Dino-mite! Dino-mite!" Her name being screamed and chanted only urged her to go on further and dance her little heart away. If her kids say the way that she ducked and dived they would have groaned and rolled their eyes at her. But they weren't there and she didnt have to worry about anything at all. 

With a final push of her feet she left into the air and came down with an air guitar finnish, smiling she stood back up and gave a bow. Flowers rained down upon her as she blew cherry kisses into the crowd. Picking a few up she then headed  to her favorite spot in the back of the room. Her 3 minutes of fame were over with. 

Thank you so much for entering, unfortunately I went with another entry, however I will be hosting more WTAs in the future, so feel free to watch out for those!!