Raelinn's Comments


Entry:

I would love to use this character in my "Bridge" story line.  The main premise of this story is that it is an almost steampunk era space port, and revolves mainly around the going's on in the town.  The locals of this space port have very firm opinions against any 'non human' residents, however besides their best efforts the town is populated by many non-humans in disguise.  Being a pretty well known cross-over port there are many informants as well as a handful of supernatural entities trying to escape governmental persecution (it's a border of galaxies, so it's pretty hard to police).

The current story focuses very much on a few characters that frequent and/or work at pub in town, which tends to be a little seedier then the rest of town.  I'm actually working on some regulars which are from a nearby town (same hub planet) one of the characters there is a vampire named Blue (the whole planet is not nearly as anti-supernatural as the main town).  His profile is pretty lacking as I clearly have an issue typing things up in a way that makes sense I mostly draw (and want to make a comic about this story line).  I've had him for about 4 years now (I've been here on TH less then a year).  I've very much been looking for relationships and friendships for him to help flesh out his role and when I read the "vampire wife" idea I actually thought it would be very neat.  Her appearance is really cool, and I think that I may make her 'missing' eye more like a 'turned' eye that she just keeps hidden.  I'd like to use her as a possible partner to Blue and also would like to give her a job in the bar my other main character Allard works in.

This is the first WTA I've ever entered here, so I'm sorry if this is a little all over the place.  I will link the group Bridge as well as Allard and Blue.

Blue

Allard Bartolomeo

https://toyhou.se/Discordia/characters/folder:350075

Thank you for your consideration!

Ahhh! I love the story line! Steampunk is such a good setting!! And the pub idea sounds great too!! And you kept the vampire wife part <33333 ahhh!!!

Sidenote :: Blue’s Design is really nice <3

Thank you for your entry!!

Aw thanks so much!  I'm glad you got a kick out of it!  I've had Blue for quite some time actually, I really gotta put his page together (I'm actually bringing him in on an off-site RP starting this week, so I'm pretty excited to use him- he needs more friends lol)

Congratulations!

You have won this WTA!

I’ll be sending over the character shortly!

Thank you so much for this wonderful entry <3 I wish you the best of luck with your stories!

Oh yay! Thanks so much! I’m very excited :) the end date came up so quick! I’ve been clicking back in the last few days- can’t believe it’s here already :)