Ooo, this character really caught up my attention! :0

The first thing I wanna note is his balanced, accurate personality: He got a good proportion between positive and negative traits. And not only that, they are quite accurate for his character. Being a teenager, influenced by his group as well as influencing them (since he's considered a leader).

And talking about leadership: That's a detail I specially liked! He actually got the personality to be it (Charismatic yet "serious"; wouldn't be likely to get bypassed because of this attitude, since charismatic leaders are stronger than violent/imponent ones; at least to what I've gotten to observe in general media/history).

I also found interesting his liking towards cinema, much more given to the era they belong to.

I couldn't really give that much of a tip for improvement, specially because I don't know a lot of pre-war history and context ;v;

I try my best of giving balanced commentary when I get the chances, so I'm sorry about that detail! ;;

Still, interesting boy! <3