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!! Thank you! Marcia is haaard to write because she spends most of the story learning to speak English so yes, it's a language barrier. She's already learned quite a lot by this point and she tends to choose words that sound like the Latin counterparts.

And I'm glad you enjoy it, it was a little embarrassing to post because I wrote it purely for enjoyment haha. They are very cute and awkward despite how they are under any other circumstances...especially Vesper, she is nervous and still trying to maintain composure, and I love portraying that.