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thank you for reading this! After thinking about the concept for like 5 seconds, I Knew Hong Yi had to be involved somehow. He actually likes the stuff, can you believe.

The other two poor victims were Felix and Adelaide. Artur would probably not mind the taste either, were he to try it. These two have tastebuds forged in fire.

Poor Vesper really didn't know what she had coming. I loved writing the sequence of thoughts that went through her mind as this disaster unfolded.

Thanks again for reading, and for the comment!