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Lorenzo must be so glad he can watch him on the ship's cameras. Who knows what happens to Emil normally?

Instead of describing outside of the ship as a "twinkling expanse," I was originally going to word it as "twinkling abyss," but I figured the tone of the word "abyss" was too frightening for something that didn't scare him.  

Indeed!

Awww, thank you so much! Maybe!