Can I just say first off his profile bio layout is amazing! I love the details in every sections, the menu slide is quite neat and the overall text style is wonderful! Next when focusing on Lui you did an amazing take on the chi and how he can control multiple types of chi forms but only uses the main few. His personality is a type I feel is more realistic too. I enjoyed reading through his bio quiet a lot and I love how you touched on his background. Everything is quite neat and the timeline is easy to understand. Defiantly a wonderful character! Added him to my favorites <3
Aw thanks for your sweet comment! I´m very happy to hear that. I have to say that I struggle with writing and it was especially hard to write all his stuff down without getting too confusing xD. So I´m happy you think that way ｡^‿^｡
Oh I feel that like everything is in your head but the minute you try to put it down in writing it leaves you or you ramble XD But overall you did excellent with him! <3
Skykristal
Lui Tosdohl
Can I just say first off his profile bio layout is amazing! I love the details in every sections, the menu slide is quite neat and the overall text style is wonderful! Next when focusing on Lui you did an amazing take on the chi and how he can control multiple types of chi forms but only uses the main few. His personality is a type I feel is more realistic too. I enjoyed reading through his bio quiet a lot and I love how you touched on his background. Everything is quite neat and the timeline is easy to understand. Defiantly a wonderful character! Added him to my favorites <3
2 years, 10 months ago
Aw thanks for your sweet comment! I´m very happy to hear that. I have to say that I struggle with writing and it was especially hard to write all his stuff down without getting too confusing xD. So I´m happy you think that way ｡^‿^｡
2 years, 10 months ago
Oh I feel that like everything is in your head but the minute you try to put it down in writing it leaves you or you ramble XD But overall you did excellent with him! <3
2 years, 10 months ago
ahw thanks! 100% yes. xD head empty
2 years, 10 months ago