The Omen- Winged
Comission done by Hybrid
- Like an omen
No matter what everyone said, being twelve wasn’t easy, Teryn knew that much. Stuck in an
age range where she wasn’t exactly a little birdie anymore, but she wasn’t an adult just yet, she
was struggling in between the two worlds with no way out but waiting. That’s fine, she thought
anyway, because her parents and older siblings couldn’t force her to stay in the nest forever. Her
little room had become too small for her wings, and Teryn was eager to explore the skies just
like older Avarian people did.
“Teryn, could you go gather my fruit order in the village? It should be ready by now” Her father
called from the kitchen, “Or are you still pouting at us?”
Teryn didn't reply at first; she knew that they were throwing her a bone, asking her to go to the
village alone, but the little city wasn’t enough for her anymore. She wanted to explore the
mountains, the valleys, the curves of the river on the hill down in the southern region. She
wanted to meet new people, new friends, discover new species of plants and insects so high on
tree branches that only an Avarian could reach.
“I’ll go, alright,” she conceded in the end, exiting her room but not dropping the pout yet. “But
when will you guys learn that I can take care of myself just fine?” She asked, crossing her arms
on her chest while her feathers ruffled in distress.
Her mother rolled her eyes. “Honey, I know how frustrating it is, okay? I’ve been there too with
my parents, and so has your father. But there’s a time for everything, and flying alone far away
from the village is too risky. We stick together, us Avarians.”
Teryn didn't reply to her, meeting her brother’s amused gaze before grabbing an empty basket.
She stuck her tongue out before jumping out of the kitchen window and soaring through the sky
so smoothly it felt like walking. This is what she loved the most: the sense of freedom that came
when the wind supported her wings, inviting her to swirl left and right, caressing her feathers
like they belonged in the sky.
Life in the village was easy. With only a few hundred Avarians sheltered there, everyone knew
everyone, and when Teryn’s wings folded on her back and her feet landed on the ground,
several warm eyes recognized her and greeted her quietly.
“Good morning, Skur,” she waved her hand at the old hybrid on the threshold of his store. Skur
had known her since she was still stumbling on her wings, barely able to flap them properly,
and he’d watch her go from a little naive birdie to the Avarian she was growing up to be. “Do
you have my father’s order?”
The old Avarian grinned and pointed at a selection of his best harvest. “Been waiting for you,
kid,” he said, placing the colorful fruits in her ready basket. Teryn’s eyes wandered through the
other boxes of vegetables and supplies, not finding as many as she usually did.
“What happened to the rest of the harvest? Has it been a busy day?” She asked.
Skur’s expression darkened. “Nah, kid, it’s because of these damn storms.”
1 - She frowned. “Storms?”
“The storms, yeah. It’s been hard to harvest a full field without finding more than half of it
ruined by rain and hail. Even snow, sometimes. I don’t know what’s happening to these skies,
but it can’t be good.”
Almost like an omen, the sky rumbled somewhere north in the distance and Teryn tilted her
head. “I’m sorry to hear that, but let me know if I can help somehow! I could even come by
your field early in the morning and help you harvest what can be saved.”
Skur smiled warmly and patted her head. “Don’t you worry, kid. It’s not the first storm I’ve
seen, it won’t be the last. Business is still pretty good, so you just fly back home and enjoy these
peaches, alright?”
Teryn wasn’t fully convinced yet, but she spread her wings again, nodded at him and jumped in
the air. It wasn’t as easy to fly with the heavy basket in her hands, but she managed to reach her
house without faltering once in the air, which only proved to her that she was actually becoming
an even more expert flier. “Here it is!” She offered the basket to her father, who grabbed it with
satisfaction.
“Skur is always a safe bet, isn’t he, darling?”
Teryn’s mom turned to him and grabbed one delicious looking apple. “He truly is. We should
save him some of these waffles,” she said, scooping a pile of freshly baked goods aside from
the others.
Teryn’s earlier bad mood had melted away in the meanwhile. Nobody surrounded by so much
love and good energy could keep a bad mood for too long, especially in front of the royal dinner
his parents had prepared for the family. “Let’s eat, then!”
After a well deserved and exquisite meal, Teryn withdrew to her room. It had been so nice to fly
again, earlier today, and she so wished her parents allowed her to go out more often
unsupervised. But the rules were clear and especially strict for the night. No leaving the nest
alone. How could a kid like her improve in her flight if she wasn’t allowed to get out and try?
She was entitled to her own failures, because it was only through them that Teryn could
understand what needed to be fixed, changed, improved. How could she explore the world if
she couldn’t even explore the nearby forest on her own?
She wasn’t proud of it, but she decided to wait for the last light in the house to be turned off;
then, when a regular snoring came from her parents bedroom, she opened the window of her
room, took a deep breath and jumped outside.
The cold air of the night ruffled her feathers, but Teryn took a deep breath, inhaling deep the
sense of freedom. Her wings spread in the dark sky, soaring over the village and the
surrounding area. When she looked up to stare at the starry sky, though, she found nothing but a
gray veil of clouds towering over her head; the storm that Skur had predicted was about to
2 - happen. Flashes of lighting in the long distance brightened the clouds, followed by weak
thunder. Teryn swirled in the air, unashamed to admit that she enjoyed the loneliness of the sky
at night, even if cloudy, even if empty. She could hear the voice of her mother at the back of her
head, We stick together, us Avarians, and of her father, No flying in bad weather, kid! but that
didn't stop her from moving further down the valley, following the sound of hidden waterfalls
and the purring of sleeping animals.
Just when she was about to push herself lower down the valley, it started raining, and it didn't
start slow. It wasn’t the kind of rain you could ignore because it could barely wet your clothes
and feathers; this was the kind rain you sought refuge from, because it stuck to your feathers,
weighted you down and prevented you from soaring high. Teryn had never flown through this
kind of rain and despite her initial nervousness, the curiosity of finding out how that felt had the
best of her. Instead of finding shelter like she’d been taught all life, she jumped higher, closing
her wings for just a moment so that the rain wouldn't catch them, only to spread them as wide as
she could to float in the air. The sight from up there was majestic: the flashing lighting in the
sky popped right and left while thunder followed like music, the water drops fell mercilessly but
so regular that Teryn couldn’t help but stand still, just staring, mesmerized.
It was when the wind started blowing that she actually lost control of the situation. No matter
how hard she tried to instruct her wings in one direction, no matter how hard her muscles
clenched to resist the air stream, Teryn was tossed around like a dry leaf, unable to fight the
power of the wind. The rain got in her eyes, slid inside her clothes, and when the wind pushed
her upside down, making her lose grip on the air underneath her wings, Teryn screamed in fear.
Shivering terribly and gasping in panic, she was pushed against the bark of a high, steady tree.
A good sign from the sky, the only one. She climbed over the thickest branch she could find,
holding on for dear life and wiping her eyes from unshed tears and rain. She had to go back
home, she shouldn’t have come out here.
The lights in her house had just turned on, she could spot them in the dark mist; Teryn shook the
water off her wings and took a deep breath and gathered the strength to fly again, just a quick
spin to reach the nest, but as she spread her wings again, the lighting struck again. Only, this
time, right on her home.
“NO—!” She shouted, covering her mouth in horror as light smoke arose from the rooftop,
where the first bits of fire were born. She had to reach them, she had to save them before—
The flame grew in width and height despite the heavy rain, spreading easily through the
chambers of her house; windows broke from the inside, spitting out pieces of glass and fabric of
the curtains. Teryn was too far away to hear voices, but even just imagining them was tearing
her up. She jumped down the branch, flying clumsily towards the village as fast as she could,
but thunder rumbled right above her head, causing her to falter and stumble on the ground. “I
have to save them,” she muttered, starting to run, since flying wasn’t an option anymore.
Another flash brightened the sky above her for a second, before a web of lighting came crashing
on the village, from the suburbs to the core of the city, from empty alleys to inhabited
neighborhoods, the storm didn't show mercy on the Avarians. Every house, every shop, every
square had been hit by lighting so powerful it started flames, and the sight of her birthplace
being destroyed so relentlessly, so cruelly, tore a sob out of her.
3 - With one last spark of hope, she started sprinting towards the entrance of the village. Her house
was placed slightly higher than the rest of the village, so maybe there was still a chance her
parents and siblings were alive—
“Wait!” A voice came from behind her before something, someone, grabbed her arm. Teryn
flinched in terror and surprise, staring wide-eyed at the lady in front of her. A woman, not a
hybrid like Teryn, although her leg wasn’t completely human, stood behind her. “You can’t go
there, it’s too dangerous,” she said. She didn't seem injured, just drenched in rain and covered
with dark spots of black dust here and there.
“My family’s still there, I have to help them!” Teryn shouted over the noise of the storm and the
thunder.
The woman shook her head, not loosening the grip on her arm in the least. “It’s too late, honey,
and it’s dangerous for us to linger around here. We have to find shelter before the lighting
strikes again.”
“I can’t leave them here, I won’t!” Teryn yelled back, trying to free herself from the grasp of the
stranger.
The woman wrapped her arms around her torso, trying to trap her on the spot and successfully
preventing her from flying away. Teryn hit her arm, her ribs and her metallic leg without
success. She was too young and too small compared to the other to manage to hold her ground
against her, but the powerful bite she inflicted on the woman’s arm managed to give herself one
second of break
The woman frowned, letting go of her for just a moment, probably wanting to resolve the
conflict more peacefully, but Teryn jumped away from her and started sprinting towards the
village. Her wings were of no use in that rain; on the other hand, it was difficult to carry them
on her back, heavy and drenched as they were, while she was trying to move as swiftly as
possible.
“Come back! Everything’s on fire, you can’t go there! Kid!” The woman shouted, running after
Teryn with her arm shielding her face from the smoke.
“I have to reach them— my family,” Teryn muttered under her breath, coughing from the stench
in the air and blinking through tears. “My family’s still there,” she whispered, one moment
before the side of the mountain was hit by lightning and wind at once.
Rocks and trees started rolling downhill, and while the woman screamed at her to move away,
Teryn could only stare in horror as the mountain debris ran over the entirety of the village like
an unstoppable avalanche, covering houses and rooftops, crushing them within the last hint of
hope of Teryn.
“I—“ she gasped, collapsing on her knees as her breath was cut off by the realization that, even
if they’d survived the fire, the Avarians couldn’t have survived the mountain crushing upon
them. “Mother, father,” she weeped, covering her face in shame, regret, despair.
4 - “Come, let’s get away from this place,” the woman spurred, grabbing Teryn by her shoulders
and pulling them up. She didn't try to coddle Teryn, she didn't try to stop her cries and shouts,
she didn't even try to stop her from hitting her and escaping. The only thing she did was lift her
up despite the weight of wet wings and carry her out of the village, away from the fire and the
danger.
Teryn didn't know how long they’d walked for when they reached the cave the woman stopped
in front of. She looked around as if to check they were alone, then guided Teryn inside of it.
There was a fireplace brightening the inside of the cave, a makeshift bed of leaves and a bowl
of water left on the floor.
“I came here right when the storm started,” the woman explained, following her gaze. “I didn't
know how long it would last, so I prepared for the worst.” She sat beside Teryn on the floor as
they both watched the rain fall outside of the cave. “I heard shouts coming from the village, so I
hurried there, thinking there was still someone alive, but it was only you.”
“I—“ Teryn started, trying to swallow the sense of guilt pooling in her chest, “I snuck out
earlier tonight. I wanted to fly, I wanted to—“ she sobbed, letting the woman pull her closer to
cry on her shoulder. “My parents and my siblings were still there, and I saw the lighting— I saw
it hit the nest. I tried to fly there, but the rain was too strong…I should have never left the
house, just like they’d said. We-we stick together, us Avarians.”
“You poor thing,” the woman hushed her, caressing through her wet feathers. “It’s not your
fault, do you hear me? None of this is your fault.” She cupped Teryn’s cheek, wiping away the
small tears still mixed with rain. “You saved yourself tonight. If you hadn’t left the house, you
would have died in that fire, or in under that avalanche. You saved yourself,” she repeated,
staring right into Teryn’s eyes with a tenderness the kid felt like she didn't deserve.
In fact, she shook her head as another wave of guilt flooded through her. “I shouldn’t have left,
so I’d still be with them right now,” she sobbed, “My family, the village…everything’s lost
now.”
“You’re not lost,” the woman said, “I found you.” She held Teryn close to her chest as if she
could break if she’d let go. Teryn swallowed with difficulty, feeling empty of everything else
but guilt. The woman smiled, although weakly, and pushed a wet lock of hair behind her ear.
“Listen to me, kid,” she said, tapping Teryn’s hand to get her attention, “Your parents would be
rejoicing to know that their little girl is safe now, to know that you survived, that you’re alive.”
Teryn’s lower lip trembled as she tried not to cry again, but without succeeding. The tears
erupted again, flowing freely like the rain outside, but the woman cuddled her even closer, and
her warmth rubbed off on her somehow, because, despite the pain and the guilt, she felt calmer
now.
“What’s your name, little bird?” The woman asked.
“…Teryn,” she murmured, looking up at her.
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“It’s a pleasure to meet you, Teryn. You can call me Val,” the other replied, smiling wider now,
as if she wanted to give Teryn more hope, a silver lining in that dark night.
The loud rumbling of close thunder interrupted the moment and Teryn flinched, shaking on the
spot and pulling her knees against her chest. Not even the soothing hand on her back helped
quieting the terror in her wings. “What will happen to me? I’ve got nowhere to go,” she
muttered, desperately searching for answers on Val’s kind face.
Val tilted her head, thinking in silence. “You could…you could stay with me,” she said in the
end. The lines of doubts that had initially twisted her expression disappeared as a resolute
determination took their place. “I’ll take care of you from now on, if you’d like to stick around
a mere mortal like me,” she winked.
Teryn gaped at her. How could she find so much energy in a moment like that, so much
confidence and hope? Teryn swallowed, looking down at her hands as she nodded weakly. “I’d
like to stick with you, Val. If you’ll have me.”
They didn't speak much after that, that night. Waiting out the storm and the rain while sitting in
front of the fireplace, broken up by the loss of her family and home, Teryn’s trembling heart
could only find refuge in the ready, welcoming arms of Val.