Melanie the Mouse's Comments


ok, i love that, maybe i could try to skate with her help

Maybe lmfao

tbh ive been commenting stuff like this on every interesting fnaf oc, hoping someone might wanna rp something fnaf based lol

Lol, well I mainly rp on discord if you use it

i do, but im currently unable to use it fully, only able to respond via notifications and such like that, but i am able to use it, it just wont update much

Rip

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Name: Melanie the Mouse


Occupation: Main roller rink bot/helper bot, she makes sure all the kids know how to skate and helps them on as well as adults, whenever there is an injury while skating she'll quickly skate the injured person/people to a first aid station and comfort any crying children


Abilities: She's extremely fast and has as good as hearing as broken Roxanne, although she is slightly slower in any area that is not her roller rink


How to know she is near: Her tail occasionally hits the ground, producing a metallic BAP!, the light blue parts of her also glow which makes her easier to see. When skating she makes alot of noise, giving you time to dodge.


Where she's at: Melanie's Mega Skating Rink, Main area, Roxy Racing (before decommissioning)

Everywhere (after decommissioning)


Relationships: Friends with Roxy, Chica,, and Sun, Is netural with Freddy, Dislikes Bonnie, Moon, and Monty


Behavior: She will wander her areas looking for the player while corrupted, saying lines in a similar vain to chica, friendly and helpful. When she sees the player she will create some noise while smacking her skates down to charge forward, giving the player a moment to dodge before she charges forward to attempt to catch the player she usually does so in straight lines but can go just around corners, if she hits the player she will jumpscare them, if she misses she'll either resume looking or if she crashes will hold her head for a few seconds, dazed from impact. 

When decommissioned for her upgrade (covered later) she will become angry and seek out the player, constantly at her fastest speed, making less noise and not giving a warning or charging. Crashing into walls no longer stuns her and she will not charge in lines, instead always skating quickly, she's harder to detect in this state but she also has to do wide turns around corners now so you can hide from her in tight places.

Whenever flashed by Camera she will say "Augh! No flash photography!" Or with Lazer Blaster "Augh! No hitting the eyes!"


Decommissioning: Decommissioning her gives you her ears which allow you to hear all bots and see them through walls, you can also see other sound making items. 

The way to decommission her is by bringing her to her roller rink and getting skates (which after gives the player permanent speed boost) then going through multiple obstacles (such as close calls with the bot) to set up obstacle course mode, then with her chasing you, you must complete three laps, at the third one a cutscene will play showing her decommissioning (may animate if character received) after which you take off her ears and begin a chase in which you must make it to the main exit of the roller rink.


Items: Items you can get related to her, 

-Roller Skates

-Melanie Mouse Skates

-"Suepr Skate!" poster

-Melanie Mouse name shirt

-Melanie Mouse plushie

-Melanie Mouse statuette 

-Melanie Ears


Extra: she has a kind sounding voice and will have a special voiced line if she sees decommissioned Roxy ("How.. How could they?!")

Additional voiced lines: 

(Pre decommissioning) "Where are you little boy?"

"Come out! I can bring you to your family!"

"Do you want some sweets? I can give you some if you come out!"

"Ah! There you are! Come here!"

"I won't hurt you! Cmer!"


(After decommissioning) "unintelligible muttering"

"Come out or I'll make you come out.."

"How could you do this?"

"Why would you do this?"

"It hurts..."

"There you are! Cmer!"

"I see you..."


(Secret lines)

When in Freddy suit: "Freddy have you seen that kid? He's not supposed to be here.."

Freddy suit after upgrading: "Are.... are those my ears? Did that kid have something to do with this?!"

Roller Rink (idle): "da dee da doo!~"

"I love skating!"


Name: Mehdi the Mouse

Occupation: First Aid! She goes around and treats minor injuries like small cuts, scrapes, bruises, and blisters. She keeps her supplies in cabinets behind the heart and diamonds on her body

Ability: She chases you down and throws a bottle of iodine to stun you. Unfortunately for her, the supplies in her body rattle when she walks, so she's very easy to hear and avoid

When you shoot her with the laser, she cries out "Photopsia!" A condition where flashes of light appear in your vision. It isn't completely accurate but she kinda just shouts the first thing that comes to mind

Her eyes have a tapitum lucidum, a layer of tissue that causes that reflective look in animal eyes at night. I mean, they don't really have the tissue, but they have the same effect as if they do. This makes her eyes glow in some of the darker parts of the Pizzaplex, making her even easier to avoid

Other: She's very motherly. She has a soft, low voice that makes her sound older than she is. She"s hooked up to microphones around the building that can pick up on children crying and alert her to where she needs to go next. She has small skates in her feet so she can get around the building faster. She's very agile and can avoid the kids easily. She uses her prehensile tail to pat kids on the head to comfort them and to hold extra supplies when her hands are busy

Phrases: I guess these are basically the things she says when she's walking around. "It's time for your check up!" "It's dangerous to go alone." "Let me make it all better!"

I JUST REALIZED THE THINGS ON HER LEGS ARE ALSO HEARTS ignore me calling them diamonds lmao

Can I adopt them

Name: Millie Mouse

Place in band: Drummer

Area: FazerBlast, Daycare

Purpose: Teach kids how to play music/Aid kids in FazerBlast/Aid Gregory

I have more info and backstory for them. I would love to have them as a character and make art of them.