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TIMELINE. IT EXISTS. WHOA. FLESHED OUT A BIT. I like to joke that he went from being Apollo Justice to Phoenix Wright (though both are coincidental). I mainly have the two upturned hair tufts in the first to contrast the downward ones in his base design.
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Gatlin Clingman
YOOO GATLIN TIMELINE :OOOO
Really cool to see his progression to where he is now. Heheh, I see the concept of him going from a bit shy to outspoken became reality. Good for him to get his energy back.
I like it how you tied his parents into the mix with his growth as a person. Also OH NO LOANS AHHHH hopefully he has them all paid off by now.... maybe... *squint*
1 year, 1 month ago
I think he does—or at least he's easily paying the loans at a steady rate, while having plenty of money still with him (as one does with paying things off, apparently). It was nice fleshing him out more, especially to add in a reason for his dumb incorrect languages slips, and while not explicitly stated here, a progress from liking magic card trick showman stuff to casino showman stuff.
Visual timelines are so nice to see growth at a glance, and read over important story beats. I should update Zane's someday.
Someday...
1 year, 1 month ago
Makes sense. esp since in Vampire just cause you have outside funds doesn't mean your others funds aren't going to something else. So that's easy to work out both for story AND mechanically.
Adding a reason for his dumb language slips is nice, breathes more life into him as a silly not-human with weird quirks caused by one's own background and upbringing. heehee, silly italian.
yeah the magic tricks to casino owner transition is very believable. And also means I get to know more about what lead him down this path (and potentially down a loser path as things might get worse, who knows).
Some day. I should do the same with Nyx but lord knows that will take forever.
1 year, 1 month ago
Nyx or Piper. Little Piper... (Then again, she only has 17 years of 'aging' in terms of looks, at least. Unless she switched up her look in other ways, years after turning.)
1 year, 1 month ago
I guess I could, yeah. Piper and how she changed over time not just childhood wise but vampire-life wise.
I'll need to figure out what she looks like anyways for story stuff, so it'll be good to have that reference ready.
1 year, 1 month ago