I finally skimmed through your site and read about your world! I love all the love and creativeness you put into it! Lui was interesting to read about! I gotta read about the others once I'm not sleepy
Aw thanks! Yea I catch some myself but then forget about it again instead of fixing it. If you find something feel free to fix/tell me, I'd appreciate that a lot :)
Thank you lots. 💕 I hate re-reading everything and still not spotting it. It's all silly mistakes I actually know better rip. Going to edit those now otherwise I forget about it again 😂.. perhaps there is an add on for easy fix or something.. I'll look around. Copy pasting into a proof reader is pretty tedious.
Skykristal
I finally skimmed through your site and read about your world! I love all the love and creativeness you put into it! Lui was interesting to read about! I gotta read about the others once I'm not sleepy
1 year, 4 months ago
ahhhw thank you so much Stormchi!🥹 <3 Thanks for looking through my stuff. My writing might suck a bit, but I hope it's still fine XD
1 year, 4 months ago
I think you write well! I did catch a one or two typos if you wanna fix those ^w^
1 year, 4 months ago
Aw thanks! Yea I catch some myself but then forget about it again instead of fixing it. If you find something feel free to fix/tell me, I'd appreciate that a lot :)
1 year, 4 months ago
Here's a couple things on Lui's bio!
Under short personality "You better don´t cross his way at night if you aren't cool with him."
Don't should be not
Longer one
"But many years a go he changed trasticly due to an unexpected event in his life"
Trasticly to drastically
Background "Mike and his group where the ones who did this..."
Where should be were
"He and his best friends Rowdig, Karly and his son Feli are always there to safe the world. Literally."
Safe to save
That's all I could catch atm. I gotta read some of the other pages once I get back home x3
1 year, 4 months ago
Thank you lots. 💕 I hate re-reading everything and still not spotting it. It's all silly mistakes I actually know better rip. Going to edit those now otherwise I forget about it again 😂.. perhaps there is an add on for easy fix or something.. I'll look around. Copy pasting into a proof reader is pretty tedious.
1 year, 4 months ago