This turned out to be kinda long rip I'm sorry,
But aaaa Marion is such a neat character!! His backstory's super unique and I love the contrasts in his personality (Him acting overall pretty timid and uncertain but being scary when angry and liking the more grisly kinds of stories)!! It's really easy to see through his backstory how he's developed as a character, and it's definitely in some really interesting ways!!! It's nice that there's so much explanation in it for what he's like now, as well! There's also not a whole lot of OCs that deal with lifelong illnesses/health problems in general, at least not as far as I've seen, so it's always nice to see that someone's including representation of that in their characters!
Overall like I said Marion is super neat and interesting and unique and Just Generally Very Good!!! There's so much info on him here but even despite that I can't help but find myself still wanting to learn more, cause it's just got me even more intrigued than I was before!
Also, not about the character, but I can't resist mentioning how absolutely wonderful your writing is?? It's so detailed, I'm honestly kind of amazed with it, but even though it's so in-depth I was still engaged and interested the whole time!! Appearance descriptions especially were really nicely done, which is impressive to me especially as someone who struggles with describing how things look! But just, in general you did a great job with his bio, seriously!!
Sorry I'm replying 9 hours late I was sleeping zzzz
But oh gosh thank you so much for the comment!! It seriously made me smile so much and hearing all those nice things about writing is making my heart feel all warm!!! I don't even have words to express how happy your comment made me ;;
No it's fine when you replied now I was sleeping too so rip (Although I know I don't,, Have to reply but shh)
But of course!! I'm always happy to tell people how good their OCs are and Marion is definitely a really good OC!! I haven't read any other of your OCs' bios fully admittedly but I have skimmed over them once or twice quickly and honestly they all seem really cool and it's really clear how much attention and development you've given them, it's admirable how much effort you've put into em, so I'm happy to compliment them, they deserve it!! And I'm also happy to compliment your writing since that definitely deserves the compliments as well, it really is wonderfully done!!
(...Also main reason for replying again is thank you for reminding me of this because I actually had planned to favorite him both because he's such a neat great character but also because definite bio-writing goals but it slipped my mind because I am A Fool so yes thank you for unknowingly reminding me ahah,)
Marion's bio is actually a little old like I wrote it back in like.... December 2016? So it actually doesn't even fully reflect my current writing and I at least hope I'm even better now haha! But thank you so much again, this is really motivating me to write more & work on my character ; o ; < 3
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Marion Bellamy
This turned out to be kinda long rip I'm sorry,
But aaaa Marion is such a neat character!! His backstory's super unique and I love the contrasts in his personality (Him acting overall pretty timid and uncertain but being scary when angry and liking the more grisly kinds of stories)!! It's really easy to see through his backstory how he's developed as a character, and it's definitely in some really interesting ways!!! It's nice that there's so much explanation in it for what he's like now, as well! There's also not a whole lot of OCs that deal with lifelong illnesses/health problems in general, at least not as far as I've seen, so it's always nice to see that someone's including representation of that in their characters!
Overall like I said Marion is super neat and interesting and unique and Just Generally Very Good!!! There's so much info on him here but even despite that I can't help but find myself still wanting to learn more, cause it's just got me even more intrigued than I was before!
Also, not about the character, but I can't resist mentioning how absolutely wonderful your writing is?? It's so detailed, I'm honestly kind of amazed with it, but even though it's so in-depth I was still engaged and interested the whole time!! Appearance descriptions especially were really nicely done, which is impressive to me especially as someone who struggles with describing how things look! But just, in general you did a great job with his bio, seriously!!
6 years, 3 months ago
Sorry I'm replying 9 hours late I was sleeping zzzz
But oh gosh thank you so much for the comment!! It seriously made me smile so much and hearing all those nice things about writing is making my heart feel all warm!!! I don't even have words to express how happy your comment made me ;;
6 years, 3 months ago
No it's fine when you replied now I was sleeping too so rip (Although I know I don't,, Have to reply but shh)
But of course!! I'm always happy to tell people how good their OCs are and Marion is definitely a really good OC!! I haven't read any other of your OCs' bios fully admittedly but I have skimmed over them once or twice quickly and honestly they all seem really cool and it's really clear how much attention and development you've given them, it's admirable how much effort you've put into em, so I'm happy to compliment them, they deserve it!! And I'm also happy to compliment your writing since that definitely deserves the compliments as well, it really is wonderfully done!!
(...Also main reason for replying again is thank you for reminding me of this because I actually had planned to favorite him both because he's such a neat great character but also because definite bio-writing goals but it slipped my mind because I am A Fool so yes thank you for unknowingly reminding me ahah,)
6 years, 3 months ago
Marion's bio is actually a little old like I wrote it back in like.... December 2016? So it actually doesn't even fully reflect my current writing and I at least hope I'm even better now haha! But thank you so much again, this is really motivating me to write more & work on my character ; o ; < 3
6 years, 3 months ago