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Aw yiss, I'm so glad their friendship came through well to you! They absolutely do care so much about each other but without...declaring it constantly, so I had to "show not tell".

I have thought so much about them I no longer have a sense of what their writing looks like to someone who doesn't know what's to come, haha.

Also lmao yes, every building in the Havaiki City financial district is a big ad, or the site of some money-making venture. I've also had a similar experience at home actually, so I guess it's a common theme these days!