"Is this character OK?" (ask here!)

Posted 3 years, 11 months ago (Edited 3 years, 11 months ago) by QuazarStar

Unsure if a character fits in EBAMTAR? Post em here and I'll have a look!

(this thread will also be used to ask which folder to put characters in if I'm not sure where they belong <u< )

Dragoonfliy

You'll see this when you hop on tomorrow but YEET https://toyhou.se/~literature/46380.ebamtar-red-death-vampire-rules

I made an effort to apply EBAMTAR accuracy but please inform me if anything needs to be edited oh god I'm tired

QuazarStar

Dragoonfliy Okay first off, I fucking LOVE this, I was gonna make a template for making new vamp types but you were even faster and I might just use what you've created because oh man this is so cool YO

A couple of points: 1.) I think having them referred to by 3 different canonical names for vampires might be a bit much, because it blocks those names from being used by others (gee Alexey how come you get three names). Especially Nosferatu I'm a bit iffy on as lifestyle-wise they live very similarly to the VtM nos, hobo marks and all. If you want to either strike some off and just keep strigoi and Red Death (which is rad btw), or make some kinda note maybe that the other names are from outside or otherwise just non-exclusive things they've been called in the past, then I think it'd be ok!

2.) you mention they have "above excellent healing" - with the context of the description I'm guessing that was just a brain fart on "average" but I just wanted to make sure? :V

Other than that I LOVE IT I will add them to the list as soon as the name stuff is settled!

(also "Most of the time in monster form the issue is finding out what counts as the head" made me laugh probably more than it should asdfsadf)

Dragoonfliy

QuazarStar I worked ALL NIGHT I was so tired but I wanted to finish it.

I'll remove the others and just keep the Red Death as their official strain name and strigoi as the common name b/c every time I write Red Death I feel like an edgelord I need a common name. (And thank you! I was trying to come up with an illness based thing and a Poe reference felt right.)

Will be fixed! It was a brain fart... Yes.It should be average.

QuazarStar

foxdog2 just fyi I don't get a notification when you edit stuff, in future you can just post directly and that way I'll see it right away ^___^

Everybody looks fine, aside from these bits:
Jagoda: I'm unfortunately gonna say no on this pretty critter; a rainbow fox/dragon hybrid with feathers is a little off-model for the EBAMTAR flavour, I'm sorry!
Kyle, Umber: These cool dudes don't have human-looking "human forms" in their refs, but if they can just appear like their refs but "normal", they would also be fine
Rust, Hae Ju: I love these dergs, but again just bear in mind they have to be a secret/in disguise somehow (which I imagine isn't hard for Hae Ju lol), otherwise they are also ok!

QuazarStar

foxdog2

No rush! I just wanted to make sure we were on the same page! Even a text notation in their bio would be totally fine, and you're welcome to submit them already to the World if you want ^___^

QuazarStar

foxdog2 I actually read these already when I saw Hae.Ju's new art lmao. gosh I love how pretty and metallic Hae-Ju is, and Rust's human form is awesome too hhh - I imagine him speaking with a thick Welsh accent idk how accurate that is but I love the image >u<

by the way, you didn't post in-character or post a link to him on the mini OC profiles thing, I was just wondering if that was intentional or just a derp? :V

zeve

heyo~

I was wondering if this character:

https://toyhou.se/2703888.marisol would be acceptable?

In the tab you can see her beast form and about info. If you need any clarification feel free to ask but she is a werecat. If you want to know more about the lore that I have with werecats it is:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10iJLdjFjbi8MG8sfIWUmr80iSm2C0163crtfhtwimtM/edit?usp=sharing though I haven't delved into the magic aspect of werecats yet (when I do i'd make a separate profile explaining it but in case you wanted to check out the species information i built on her kind~

Marisol would be out of the hellcats colony for this RP (sometime after she has left it) so you know "Just settling in" kind of a vibe for her~

QuazarStar

zeve

Her beast form is so FLOOFY oh my god hhhh

I'd say she's fine! Werecats aren't really a thing in mythology, but I'd say as a sort of werewolf variant they're fine, considering they seem very similar to werewolf lore. The only thing you'd have to tweak with her backstory and the werecat lore, if you wanted to bring it up at any point, is that the colonies would have no open interaction with humans and they'd be secrety-secret. But like, that's a super minor point lol

also:
"A common fact is that if a loved one calls out to a werecat and places a piece of clothing on them they will shift back to humans"
my dumb stupid brain: "pspspspsps"

zeve

haha yeah! she is super fluffy

The colonies themselves are kept quiet (they just liked the moniker of hellcats as convenience due to it being the high school mascot) but werecats (and supers) are not known in the world.

But yes pspspspsps may work out very well if you were really trying to get her to come to you lololol i'll submit her to the world then! tysm~ looking forward to RPing!

AsheNightwind

Hey, I LOVE the idea of this place. I've been looking for an RP place where I can stretch this girl's wings out (pun intended), and would like to run her by you first.

https://toyhou.se/7335921.ashligh-ashe-o-bryne

Her info is...well...coming (It's a lot, she's one of my oldest characters), but if you have questions about her I'll be willing to answer. And she does have a dragon form, I just have to post it.