Kleurs - Opinions?

Posted 5 years, 1 month ago (Edited 4 years, 10 months ago) by entipikal

(This post was written a while ago but I'm still looking for opinions and you're still welcome to ask me to own a Kleur! I'm currently in the process of writing a MUCH BETTER bio and thread. Stay tuned!)

Not exactly an interest check thread, as I'm not planning on running this as an open/closed species because I have no idea how they work  but I want to see other people's opinions on the species I'm working on! And if you want your own, tell me and we can work on it! It's still a WIP, but maybe other people's opinions will help improve them! I don't know if this belongs in the creator's corner or character discussion, or here, so, here goes-

TL;DR - Kleurs are a colour-coded species with horns and floaty heads. Each colour, from red to purple, has a different number of magical orbs that float alongside their head and kind of keep them alive. Lots of people hate Purples because they're "weak" but they're not. There's also Shadows, formed from the ashes of dead Kleurs, which don't have floaty orbs, so they need to either seek out magic springs in the deep forests or attack Kleurs for their magic to survive. 

Want to know more? Here's the big species bio! It's on Google Docs, and if I set it up correctly, you should be able to make comments and suggestions on how to improve. Or fix typos. Also you might see me typing! It's a bit of a mess right now. Warning, their society has a lot of what is basically racism and there's a few mentions of death and general violence. Keep yourself safe!
And here's the character folder! A few more are listed in the doc. A couple of designs under the spoiler tag.

010120194.pngMinty, a civilian angry at her own species for being horrible to itself. 160320194.png

Moth, one of the six deities. Depending on your site theme his body might look weird! Try opening the picture in a new tab

This is my first time making anything OC related this complex. so please tell me if you notice something that doesn't make sense! Maybe I haven't written the answer yet, maybe I made a mistake. Who knows!

Thank you for reading and I hope to see your opinions! 

entipikal

Clandestino I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Remember that if you ever have any questions about the world, or Kleurs themselves, just ask and I'll gladly answer! 

(Maybe I'll even draw him, if that's okay with you?) 

entipikal

Escargot Oh shoot I almost missed this- he looks so amazing! I love the bracelets you added, and the colours too! I think Fig is a great name. I might even draw him, maybeeee-

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Clandestino I like that idea! Most Kleur cities are surrounded by forests after all, probably full of wild flowers! 

Escargot You mean Sangria? He is pretty angry but I mean. That's what makes him so lovable. (also you definitely can!) 

It's also really cool to see you two interacting with each other too- I'd love to see your two interacting

This chat is moving so fast it's almost hard to keep track of but at the same time I'm so happy that you both like Kleurs! It makes me happier than you can imagine so thank you both! 

entipikal

Escargot They don't! I know it can kind of be hard to draw some expressions because of that but you get used to it after a bit-

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Clandestino Aaa, look at those flowers! They look so cool, and Tansy looks great as well! I gave his bio a read too, I love it as well! He sounds like he needs a hug and I will definitely give it to him

Escargot Hehe, even without mouths you handled their expressions really well! I love Sangria's face especially, ">:I". I also read Fig's bio! It was really interesting to see how he got into what he does. Also, you can put two characters in an image and if you want you can make the drawing of Fig and Sangria pop up in Sangria's gallery too!