Comments on Chapter 1: Birdcage of Doves and Peacocks

Sorry for the lateness, I was caught up in Art Fight--thank you both of you bulgariansumo and @afternath! This is quite old and I'm glad it still holds up. I'll probably post a new story to this collection sometime soon, once I finish...all the other things I'm supposed to be doing, haha

It's impressive how you were able to capture the plight of Holia (and the birds) so neatly in this one short piece! Poor them, though...

Definitely eager to see more!