This chapter has given me an appreciation of Aiden, I like how he manages to be a scary brooding presence on a crew that is largely less...like that. I am amazed Leon was able to figure out the patterns clearly designed to be hostile and also...the ending...Roxie causing her own quarry to pass the stage and escape...
I like the title of the next chapter, wonder what it'll be about!
It's very funny to me how Aiden, and to a lesser extent Lorenzo, are seen as intimidating by most of the rest of the crew, but they have one Designated Friend who instantly undoes that just by being near them. But unfortunately for Leon, Jun couldn't be here, so Roxie will have to do. I think even Leon is amazed he was able to dodge all of that. It's like that one tumblr(?) post where rhythm game players get into a zone and don't know how they did it. I've felt that way playing danmaku games. But once you start actually thinking about it is when you start slipping up.
Thank you! The chapter names (aside from Tutorial Stage maybe) are all boss theme names I came up with, or at least the second half of the name, since Touhou boss themes are often formated [title] ~ [other title].
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