✍️ Write based on the line prompt above

Posted 6 years, 10 months ago (Edited 5 years, 4 months ago) by Caine

This game is very similar to Respond to the prompt above you. In this game, however, the prompts are random lines, such as "What do you think you're doing?" and "Do you need help?" instead of questions or scenarios.
Your response should be in the form of short story / flash fiction! 

How it works:

  1. Claim your post so you won't get ninja'd! It'd suck to lose all the writing you did just because someone wrote & posted faster than you!
  2. Edit your post and respond to the line given to you. You need to include the line in your story, but otherwise you have free hands to interpret it as you like. The response should be in the form of short story / flash fiction.
  3. At the end of your post, make sure to give the next person a line as well! Make sure the line is not too specific or restricting so the thread won't get stuck.

Rules:

  • Keep it PG13!
  • Use the spoiler function if your post is very long! It'll be easier for others to scroll down if they aren't met with a wall of text
  • Make sure to post IC so people will know which character you're using in the prompt & they can potentially check it out!
  • YOU CAN RESPOND AS MANY TIMES AS YOU LIKE like you don't need to wait for a certain amount of people to reply until you're allowed to.
  • Honestly this thread is so dead that anarchy reigns and if you don't fill your claim it's not the end of the world, as long as you provide a line for the next user 

Example:

Line: "What do we have here?"

Reply: "What do we have here?" the man asked with a repulsive smile on his face. He had tied Xavier up while he was unconscious, and was now pointing at him with a supposedly loaded gun - Xavier had no intentions to take a risk and believe the gun was fake. "Not so smart anymore, huh? Looks like foxes aren't all that clever after all!"

"I'm not a fox!" Xavier hissed.

"That should be the least of your concerns right now, given your current situation," the man laughed, but his gun was still pointing at the detective.



Here is a line for the first:

"I'm never going to do that again, I swear!"

 121 Moskva Ledokol

          On the first visit of his own eldest brother to the fleet where he reigned over, Varyag certainly didn't expect to be in the situation he was right now. Sitting on the sofa in the reception room and lazily watched Slava went absolutely crazy with cleaning the room as if this was the HQ of the Black Sea Fleet and the younger Atlant was the one visiting the first Atlant, not the other way round.

          Of course, it wasn't like he was unaware of Moskva's 'neat freak' tendency, but apparently he had underestimated the Black Sea Fleet's flagship. Even as he believed that days spent by coercing his subordinates to clean their HQ building the best they could should have been sufficient, nope, Slava was still able to find fault on the level of cleanliness and now got down to deal with the 'filth' Varyag simply couldn't detect with his bare eyes. Was his oldest brother shitting him or what? On the other hand, it was a bless that Pyotr Velikiy, the other flagship from the Northern Fleet, opted for a tour around Vladivostok led by his Fregat subordinates. It would be  totally embarrassing for Petya to witness such situation...

          "Slava..." His hoarse voice raised over the noise of operating vacuum cleaner, "When will you stop? This is insane."

          "Well, sorry you're stuck with your insane oldest brother anyway, Roska. Ugh...I'm so disappointed in you. The state of this room is embarrassing," such accusation brought a frown to the younger flagship's face. "You have already made an embarrassment out of me the same way anyway, dear brother."

          A small smile graced the first android of the project 1164 Atlant's face, a genuine one unlike the 'facade' he often put up. He continued to clean the reception room and mused aloud, "I wonder how Stasik would feel right now? You think he's going to whine and moan when we have a skype session with him?"

          "Haha..." That wasn't quite a laugh actually, as Varyag's frown deepened, "he can cry all he wants and I won't care. Serve him right for being super happy to leave our...home...for Severomorsk in the 80's."

          "Man, you're harsh...poor Stasik." In contrary, even though he displayed his sympathy for his first younger brother, Slava's voice was still laced with amusement. The verbal quarrel between his two younger brothers always entertained him greatly.


"It feels as if I get punched in the face."

Ikari Rondonu

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"Of all the paths you could have taken, this is what you chose." 

Caine

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"It's like you haven't aged a day from when we last met!"

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Bump! Also whoops I should really get around finishing that claim - it's been hectic lately 

xxoldxx

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Father Priest PicklePantry

"Hurry! The Heavenly Lord's army is coming, we need to prepare... Hell's Madonna is giving birth right now... Oh, what do we do?"

The screen suddenly went black.
A demon whose face was surrounded by horns and eyes blinked simultaneously as the TV was turned off. "Hey!" it yelled and turned to glare at the priest that held the remote. "I was watching that!"
"Ye can finish it in Hell, demon," spat Father Priest as he sat down on the table. After days of searching, he finally found the demon responsible for possessing one of the lads that lived down his street. The lad was a rebellious teen that always rode his bike far too fast, the priest always screamed that he'd get into danger if he kept doing that. And now look what happened, ran straight into a demon and got his soul taken. And now it was up to him to get that soul back.
"So what do you plan on doing, Father?" snickered the demon as it rested its chin against the palm of a large, clawed hand. "Fight me? Throw holy water at me? Surely an aged one like yourself couldn't hope to beat me."
"Aye, I'm no match for ye physically," Father Priest nodded. He reached from besides him and set down a large bottle of whiskey on the table. "So we'll have a drinking match. Whoever drinks the most wins the soul. What say ye, Heathen?"
Each eye widened as it stared at the alcohol. For a second, the demon was stunned into silence, then it exploded with laughter. "Doesn't your kind chastise others for this? You can't be serious!" The demon looked at the challenger, seeing not an ounce of humor on his face. Slowly it straightened up. A drinking match between an old human, what a story. This was almost too easy! "Very well, I'll humor you. But if I win-" It lurched an arm forward, a claw right between the unwavering priest's eyes. "-I'll take your soul too."
Without any hesitation, the priest replied,
"Aye."

The third bottle of alcohol was emptied, and Father Priest didn't even have a drunk blush on his face. He sat up, his expression the same as earlier- stern and serious.
The demon, on the other hand, was desperately gripping the table to keep itself steady, body swaying and the eyes that weren't shut tight were spinning.
"Y-You're not... You're not human... You can't be...!" Two wide, terrified eyes looked at the holy man across from it. "W-What are you?!"
Father Priest grabbed the fourth bottle, slowly uncapping it. Blue eyes flickered to the monster, sending shivers down its spine. "I be a man of God, Demon, and with this I BANISH YE BACK TO THE FIERY PITS OF HELL!!" He tilted his head back and guzzled down the drink's contents, ignoring the burn at his throat, stray drops of whiskey dripping down his chin.
The demon screamed as though it had been exorcised, clearly losing the battle to the monster across from it. A rift opened up beneath him, dozens of hands grabbing at it and dragging it out of the mortal world, leaving behind the young teen that almost became another snack for the demon. 

With the freshly freed teen unconscious and the demon gone, Father Priest leaned back in his chair. Now the world was starting to spin. Oof, he went too far this time. It's been so long since he'd done this, he might've gone overboard.
"I be gettin' too old for this shit," he grumbled then turned his head, ushering for one of his cats to go fetch the teen's family.


"Could you stop doing that??"

 "Ten" GalaxieAuLait

"Could you stop doing that?"

Wright's head quickly snapped up from his idle doodling. He looked up at Beckett who had paused his origami folding. The young man's paper cape covered most of Wright's view of him, and then Wright realized what he'd been doodling on. The bottom part of Beckett's cape was now marred with red crayon doodles of ghosts, flowers, stars and small, nondescript animals. He looked towards the small piles of paper set to the side.

"Whoops, I guess I didn't realize I ran out of paper..." Wright said, chuckling nervously. Beckett stood up from his chair and whipped around to grab the bottom part of the cape.

"You drew on my cape?! I thought you were only tugging on it!" Beckett exclaimed, not even attempting to hide his distress. Wright flinched slightly, guilt making his stomach uneasy. He paused and sighed, regaining composure. "You need to be more careful."

"Sorry..." Wright mumbled. Beckett dropped his cape and flicked his hand, and suddenly the wax from the crayon was sliding off the cape and onto the floor in a mess of red shavings as Beckett sat down to return to his origami.

"It's alright, Wright, but just... Please be more careful next time." Beckett sighed. And as Beckett finished up another star, Wright began to set his sights on 'redecorating' the walls.



"Put that down, you'll have someone's eye out with it! No, not that, that!"

Dylan Fen BluOwlett

"Put that down, you'll have someone's eye out with it! No, not that, that!"

Dylan looked down at the two objects he was holding. One was a sort of wooden object, wherein it could create shapes and writing when pushed against a surface. The other object was a sort of silver thing. He found it in Bren’s pantry with other objects similar to it. It was quite shiny, and looked like a tiny sword. Looking at the two objects further, Dylan actually no clue which one to put down, leading hi, to look dumbfounded at an angry looking Bren.

“ ahh, wh-which one should I put down “ Dylan asked again, in a soft voice, slightly scared at being yelled at by Bren.

Bren sighed in frustration, and used his fingers to massage his forehead. Looking back up at Dylan he said “ The knife, obviously. Cause with how your using it, could hurt someone else, “

“ Th-this one? “ Dylan asked with a small and shakey voice. “ YES, of course that onee “ burst out Bren, later realizing his mistake, biting his lips. He looked down and nodded his head. Taking in a deep breath he then said “ ye-yea that one...”

The change in tone, helped calm Dylan nerves. He nodded his head and place down the knife on the nearby coffee table, and went back to sitting cross legged on the couch, moving on the tamper with the pencil. Bren looked back up Its also kind of shar- “

“ I’m not that stupid to know how sharp objects work thank you very much “ retorted Dylan in a sudden change of mood. This surprised Bren, and left him in slight shook. “ I-I don’t mean it that way, I-I meant that maybe... ahhh...” he sighs in defeat “ Ok.., fine... sorry... didn’t mean to make it sound like I was calling you stupid..” hu himg his head and looked away from Dylan.

Dylan rubbed the back of his head, flustered from his recent outburst. Decorating his place freckled face with a hints of red tint. “ I-I ahh, it’s ok.. “ he said, “ I kniw y-you guys are trying to look after me and all, consi-sidering it’s my f-first time up here in the human w-world. But I.... I would appreciate it if y-you had more trust in me. I’m not some kid you need to constantly look after... b-but I guess my curiosity does get the better of me sometimes, and I can be klutzy, a-and clumsy, and cause trouble and then cause more trouble and the- “

“ Stop “ Bren said, as he tapped his fingers on the coffee table, letting the gears in his head turn as he thought of what to say. “ I guess..l y-your right to some extent... “ looking back up at Dylan, olive eyes meeting blue he said, “ Your not a kid. And your not stupid. And maybe, I should get checked for my quick temperment, but ahh the point is that... yea... I should trust you with yourself more often... if you could promise me to be more careful... the night I guess that would put me more at ease at least... “

Dylan looked at him with sparks in his eyes . He smiled “ Y-yes, of course! I-I’ll be more carful. “ he brought his hand to his forehead in a salute “ You can count on it... also.. thanks for the concern Bren “

Flustered, Bren turned away, “ I-I’m just concerned cause you’re our guest here.. and my master would totally have my head isn’t I wasn’t looking after you “ he exclaimed out, hunching into flustered ball of a human being. “ Haha, ok ok. You say sooo, “ laughed Dylan “ Awww but cmon, you know you love me AHAHAH. “

“ Shut up ya fish, of I might just fry you for dinner “ said Bren as he went back knto his pile of books looking vigorously for the page he left off at. Smiling Dylan then stood up to look for his new play thing, and to try not to break anything in the process.

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“ We aren’t lost! According to this map we’re right... right.... ahhh... oh dear.. “

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"What do you mean you don't know?"

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"Hey, uh, guys? You need to see this."

 The Forestchild AlwaysGradient

"Hey, uh, guys? You need to see this." Hiking could be described as a bizarre past time for a group of teenagers with brightly dyed hair and leather jackets on their shoulders. Disregarding their style of dress, the seven teens belonged in the forest, it was a place of familiarity. The peaceful sounds of nature with their idle chatter about whatever fleeting topic they came by. Carson listens half-heartedly to the conversations around him and the small sounds of the forest. He pauses mid-step, closing his eyes, the six other footsteps around him stopping. He smiles slightly, hearing Jade fidget with her metallic necklace with her ringed fingers. Birds singsonged in the trees, squirrels chirp and chatter, navigating through the half-melted snow to find their buried nuts. In a moment, the forest goes silent, bloody screaming heard in the distance. Carson opens his eyes, holding his breath as he walks off the trail. "Uh, Carson," Jade asks, clutching a fist around her necklace. "Heard somethin'." Carson mumbles as he picks up a long stick, pushing away a bush of nettle. Quickly leaving the trail behind, Jade following behind him. As Carson weaves through the trees, he counts the nettle bushes around him. One, two, three, four, five-eight. Bile stops in his throat at the sight before him. Carson leans onto the tree next to him as he covers his mouth. Jade steps up from behind him "Hey, Carson, why'd you..." She trails off, eyes wide at the sight. A bloody, green clothed child stared at the two. Panting for air as they hold their arm, where a massive gash tore through their worn sweater. The child favored one leg, as the other held an injury that pierced through what had to be muscle. Their feet caked with dirt and blood. They limped backward, eyeing the two punks wearily. "No-no." Stammers Jade, holding up her hands openly. The child falls backward, a choking sob erupting from their throat. Carson began to hear the bloody screaming again, it surrounded them. As if the screamers were closing in on them. Jade calls back to the trail "Hey, uh, guys? You need to see this."

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"Don't freak, It's in their nature. You can't blame them."

Pep TiredSpider

Pep had been chased through the alleyways and narrow footpaths, and now she had hit a dead end.  The dogs reared up at her, ripping her dress and knocking her to the ground. Struggling to breathe, she let out one last cry as her glasses cracked and vision blurred.

Juno had had a frustrating day at training, never really mastering the correct moves. Shaking her out of her self-hatred, a familiar scream echoed down one of the most feared alleyways. Instinctively, she pulled out her whip and started running.

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Pep finally came to her senses as Juno lashed away the last few dogs. Her eyes prickled with tears. What had she gotten herself into?

The small harpy snapped into focus hearing the whine of the dogs. She couldn't help but feel incredibly sorry for them, even though moments earlier, she had been scheduled for their lunch.

She intervened abruptly, anxiously wiping away blood and straightening her shattered glasses.

"D-don't freak, It's in their nature. You can't blame them."

 Juno barely looked up, rage dancing in her eyes. However, she slowly put away her whip.

"Those street mutts don't deserve your kindness, they tore you apart for God's sake. You now probably have over a million diseases thanks to them." Juno roughly grabbed Pep's arm and marched to the main road, down to the clinic. 

"And you should know better than to walk into old PJs's maze. You're lucky you only met his dogs."

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"Heeey...stop getting in my way!"