To be honest, I like it a ton! It definitely shows a lot of potential! I really like your homestuck centered artwork. The way you draw trolls and (what I assume is, never got far with homestuck) the dog man! I think the thing I like most however are the facial expressions. They are very cute and have a ton of unique flair! One tip I might have for ya though, I would suggest maybe applying filters to your artwork? You mainly use traditional, which is dandy, but sometimes the shadows of you/camera can be distracting. Applying filters make the shadows hard to notice, and could even make the drawing look a little cooler! At least, that’s what I’ve noticed with my own work. Hope it helps a little! You’re already doing amazing though :0 keep up the fantastic work!
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