Comments on Chapter 2: Head in the Stars of Sight for Four Eyes

Emil sure has an affinity for unwittingly setting himself in fire or otherwise putting himself in danger.

Dang, flying in space sounds like so much fun. Leon is extremely eager to dive headfirst into something that most would find terrifying and I can respect that. I just love the idea that you could potentially fly off and become lost in space at any moment, except he has people looking out for him to make sure that doesn't actually happen.

Thank you, Newton's first law! Important to remember in the absence of air resistance.

That last moment was really nice. I love these little moments you create. I wonder if the two will bond over missing earth.

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Lorenzo must be so glad he can watch him on the ship's cameras. Who knows what happens to Emil normally?

Instead of describing outside of the ship as a "twinkling expanse," I was originally going to word it as "twinkling abyss," but I figured the tone of the word "abyss" was too frightening for something that didn't scare him.

Indeed!

Awww, thank you so much! Maybe!