Random thoughts on the OC above [HIGH EFFORT]

kirchhoff

- Right off the bat, I really like Null's design. Love the spider-like legs that come out of his back and the "crown" of spikes/horns on his head is just so good considering he's essentially a personification of intense greed. 

- And oh is that little bit about him being made in the image of a public idol and also being, as you put it, "cruel mockery of human desire and a walking effigy of endless greed" it's just so good. It's the little things that count, ironically enough.

- Not just a personification of greed but also perhaps a personification of a gambling addiction. Perhaps that's not actually the case but it's certainly my take on it (Considering I struggle a bit with gambling as well)

- The bit about him being genuine and true with his victims, and it still being their downfall...I love that so much. Because that's what greed is, it's rotten at it's very core and it isn't something you can just really...accept about yourself, because it WILL swallow you up and destroy you from the inside.

- [Also side-note to the above but I have a character sort of like that in the form of Semyherrais so yeah. I love characters like these two, they're so interesting.]

- "Null has no one set look. He's capable of appearing as whatever his victims deem the most appealing, and even take on forms beyond any life's possibility." I have nothing else to add here, this is just golden. I love it so much, truly fitting for the embodiment of human greed and desire.

- "The only real way to protect yourself from Null is to be satisfied with who and where you are; otherwise, he wouldn't even seem like a predator to you." And there it is! There it is! Ultimately the root source of greed and desire IS that someone looks poorly upon themselves and thus seeks to boost their image of themselves through superficial and material means! You cannot want for everything material if you have everything spiritually! YES YES, this is so GOOD! I LOVE THIS!

- "but until he gets comfortable living off meals of porridge and water we know that day will never come" LITERALLY. THIS IS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT!

- "TLDR: Imagine wanting to do something and there’s someone egging you on because he knows you’re going to fail. What a jerk." Ah, an instigator. I'd be lying if I said I can't relate. Though I suppose there's a difference between goading your brother into doing a stunt that will definitely end poorly because it'd be somewhat comical and driving someone to their own doom through their own greed and lust for material pleasures.

Anyways, I absolutely love Null's character. The ideas and philosophies behind him and the commentary on human wants and desires. It's all so good, you did a really amazing job with this character.

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- Oh, an animatronic, this is my first time with animatronics. xD

- ...and a possesed one, interesting, what could go wrong?

- He sounds like a very scary one but I like how he is not completely possesed. 

- Damn, his gallery is quite the spooky one, isn't it? Glady it is just 8pm around here, so, let's gooo. 

- I love how he can look cute and so creepy at the same time, I find that concept very appealing personally.

- His art has a very interesting and unique cartoonish style, it really stands out, it's very recognizable!

- This piece looks like it came straight out of a creepypasta, should I pray tonight? :'))))

- I also love how it looks so much like a screenshot from a cartoon, it makes you feel it even more. 

- I would never suspect a thing from this piece. LOL He looks so innocent on it, not at all possesed, just a cute bean. *cough cough*

- Overall I wish I could know more about him so I could elaborate more, since I really liked him.

• immediately, i enjoy that there's a lot of information! you've put a lot of thought and love into this character! it's inspiring to see and makes me want to give some of mine that i've neglected the time and patience.
• an AOT oc! i don't think i've seen those since AOT came out. interesting!
• i like that you've integrated her with the original cast of AOT and have given her a place among them. it's not something i see a lot at all, and it's nice to see that you've embraced it and are enjoying it!
• her obsession with the titans is amusing to me. they're so terrifying and yet she's just like oh yeah, i'd like to touch one and see what it feels like.
• her growth is exceptional, very good! she learns and grows as time goes on, becoming smarter and stronger!
• the break in her character is sad, but it's good to see that she overcomes it and moves forward with the help of her friends!
• i hope to see her more in the forum games, maybe! she's a very cute character and has a lot going for her!

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1. Dallas Wallas is a funny nickname to me, idk why. I keep calling it Dallas W-al-ass vs. Dal-us Wal-us and I find it funny.
2. "It's like my the inside of my head, my thoughts-- they're all gridded, cyan lines of old, forgotten screen savers." This is such a good quote!! I love it
3. His alternate pictures on the profile itself, those are so lovely. "Selling my soul" is a really good one. His haunted but tired expression really lets me have some insight into the type of character he's going to be before I get into the meat of his profile.
4. "Dallas did just that and found out that it isn't linked to anything and isn't special at all. Or so he thinks." This is an interesting plot hook, I hope to find out more by going through his profile. If I don't I'll be curious forever about it!
5. Having no sense of self is interesting for a character. I find characters that blend in with whatever friends their with to be unique individuals underneath that. But doing complete 180s depending on who it is a bit of an extreme.
6. Disliking people with "better personalities" is curious considering his personality changes based on who he's around. Does he not see himself as being better because of his connection and interactions with them?
7. Ah, catastrophizing. The bane of so many people's existence. Doing it as a sense of comfort is a take I don't think I've seen, and I like that he finds comfort in something that should really make him less comfotable.
8. Rejection for a second time, he's real hung up on that. It's impossible to be accepted by everyone, people just dislike others sometimes. Trying to be the exception to the rule is something that's not going to end well for him. Curious how that plays into his story.
9. Oh, I saw he was a former paramedic but didn't realize he'd failed. "He's just not good at anything," this is a sad outlook to take from that. Poor guy.
10. So he didn't "Fail" as a paramedic, he gained a new outlook on the world and decided to resign. I don't see that as afailure, but if he does then it must've been crushing for him. I wish he'd not resigned and instead stuck it out or tried again one day.
11. Aww, was ditching his writing something a group of people told him was cringe, or did he view it as such and stop without outside influence?
12. I hope one day he is able to cope with his splits and personality disorder. Struggling with the same disorder makes me really emphasize with him as a character, and I sincerely hope he does well in life.

NP: The "Appearance" section is pretty short and the "Skills" are full uncompleted. Feel free to skip those and focus on the rest!

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- I was looking at his gallery and thought ''Wow I really love the art this CHAOSCLOUD person made of him, it has so much personnality and such a great style'' - and then I checked your username!! So good job on you for that art it really looks great, it's very unique and reminds me of 80s cartoons.

- Speaking of, I love the red tones you use for his skins in your art. It really reminds me of the classic ''red devil'' and I think it shows that  he is, in fact, an imp. Especially with those demon orange eyes! I love the lack of eye white, it fits well with your style and still shows his demon side very well.

- Since he came with Lucifer at first, I wonder if his revolt agaisnt Lucifer was due to him falling for Diana? Or did he follow Lucifer with the goal of stopping him in the first place?

- I also wonder if Diana knew he was a imp when she first saw him or if she thought he was an angel... By that I mean, is his disguise convincing to other angels??? He doeswear a red robe but I suppose imps don't really look like, by the looks of his two other imps companions!

- Overall I like this story and the whole ''analog'' theme going on with it. I'd see this become a nice analog horror story or just a false ''lost media'' thing with some creepy elements. You have a very unique skill when it comes to your style and it carries super well into that sort of story :)

• Thats a pretty interesting surname, kinda makes me wonder what her background would be?
• Pretty fitting how her name is slaughter and her job is basically a hunter haha
• I feel really bad for her, no one should be forced to marry someone they dont want to hh-
• Do other people know shes half faery? Kinda curious how other people would think of her when they hear about it, considering shes religious too maybe people might have some bad impressions of her
• YEAHHH GNC PEOPLE ARE SO SLAY MUEHEHHEE
• Shes a faery hunter right? Seeing how she dislikes vampires i assume it might have to do with maybe how hard they might be to kill? Or does she just see vampires and think "Absolutely not" AGDNABNDS
• Her parents suck i mean seriously they literally asked for a daughter and they got one. Heck maybe if they raised her well she'd be good anyways despite being half demon 
• Dang shes self taught in french AND english and here i am struggling to spell diarrhoea or smth
• Ok but i really like the dynamic between Xander, Anne and Alexandre lol. Monster hunters and their monster companion!!! 
• THAT ENDING THOUGH I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM HNRGRHVRV

-I'm usually not a fan of using red for ocs, just because I don't like the color, but the thumbnail looks really pretty

-The design itself is pretty unique, I think. I don't see a lot of characters with multiple heads. He's a cutie in general!

-The two outfits I see go HARD. I'm looking at the images first, and I'm assuming he is a priest of sorts?

-The species is "wermling." No idea what that is, but I can use context clues. If he's a bunny, does that make him an anthro design? I just assumed he was a human with worms sticking out his head.

-How on Earth do you "accidently" start a cult?! You did something on purpose and I AM ON TO YOU Asa.

-I was also wrong about the priest thing, heh. OR WAS I SINCE HE STARTED A CULT?

-I like how it says he "obviously" doesn't collect live bugs, as if dead ones isn't weirder. I feel like it is. Even if he was a taxidermist, I still feel it is an odd thing.

-Why are the werms such menaces? I don't like them, STINKY. They are spoiled and rude. And if you ask me, lamb isn't even that good. You need variety!

-I'm curious about The Angel. It's described as "fallen," so I assume she has an evil intent of sorts. But the blood drinking seems to be the only thing she wants. Curious.

-I now see how he accidentally started a cult. I definitely understand why he'd be reluctant to not say he's just some dude who made a cool deal with an Angel.

• starting off, I really get a good feel for the personality based on the avatar for the character! They seem happy and bubbly.
• Also just realized their name is Iowa and though I doubt it’s in reference to the us state, my interest is still very peaked.
• Very, very awesome profile code! I love the textbox/visual novel style chat! And the aesthetics are absolutely peak!
• Cyromancer? What’s that? It sounds very interesting to me! It’s giving like ice/freezing powers for some reason, though I doubt it. (Wait, is is the similarly spelled ‘Cryo’ that making me think that haha)
• I JUST FOUND THE CHAT BUTTONS OH MY GOD THE FLIRT SPRITE IS ADORABLEE 🫶🫶 and their responses are so neat in general!
• ‘Status “alive”’ excuse me 😳 what do you mean by “alive”. what is going on to make them ‘“alive”’ and not ‘alive.’
• Eating I feel you sib ❤️ we love food here. I wonder what his favorite food is? I’m getting cold treats, like slushies and icecream! 
• Slay we love a goofy but superior but serious but friendly queen 
• WAIT I WAS RIGHT ABOUT THE ICE MAJICK :0000 But that’s really cool though! And they seem to have so much lore surrounding them and their family too. I can tell you must have spent forever on the worldbuilding of her universe, and as someone who’s done the exact thing, I absolutely applaud you!
• Oh no babeyy 😭 wait that’s awful imagine being experimented on like that-
• Ohhh, so that’s why she’s “alive”. Man this child keeps pushing her luck with these deals did she not see what happened last time with maxwell???
• Asdldpkde it’s hard to look cool with babey face (I would know 😳) but he pulls it off so we’ll help me why will fictional characters always have more rizz than me even when they don’t exist irl 😭
• THE BROKEN BUTTERFLY HILT IS SUCH A FREAKING AWESOM CONCEPT!!! that’s so neat! /gengengen
• Overall 10/10 character would read profile again. (On a serious note, they’re actually really well written, and I absolutely get the feeling of hyperfixating on a character to a degree such as this, so awesome job for actually managing to put your thoughts into a comprehendible narrative 👍it’s hard to do, but you did it.)

• the fact that markiplier is his headcanon voice is absolutkey amazing and i love that lol. Instant win. Now all i can imagine is him saying "hello everybody my name is Talus" and its amazing

• i LOVE his playlist alot tbh. I know alot of the songs and their all really good choices! And plus, they fit the character well which is good. "My ordinary life" is my fav choice on that list.

• now im curious, how was he forced into attending this school?? Could he not escape or run away in any way?? Is there something keeping him there?? Either way, sounds like a lousy situation 😔

• i couldnt stop looking at this peice ( TW ⚠️ gun/death ) its done amazingly!! The emotion and pose is phenomanal! Overall its probably my fav peice in Talus' gallery along with that one peice of ship art (speaking of i wanna see more of those 2 😭)

• ok, now i love his design quite abit!! Especially the tail!! It really looks magical and i truely admire it alot!! Like, theres alot of things you can do with such a simple but effective design, so good work on that!! 

• i really think talus is a great character that is deeply loved which is nice to see, hes got great story and design and i hope to see more of him!!

Miscellaneous:

- I like that the pfp already tells me a lot about the character. Puzzles is a maniacal villain for sure

- She gives me danganronpa-Junko vibes, just because she literally hates everyone and is so full of apathy to the point of dehumanizing everyone, even herself

- "she is purely written to be evil" we don't have enough characters like that these days

- why exactly is it called "the red hoodie experiments"? I kinda laughed upon reading the name, like: "I know it's really difficult to share my past. I could've kept living in hiding, fearing nothing, and I could have resumed living a normal life, trying to forget those horrifying moments. ... But this is important, not just for me, but for everybody involved in this horror show that is either in hiding or have tragically lost their lives. 

"... I'm a survivor of the Red Hoodie Experiments." 

- LMAO

- her backstory is nice! it's detailed and planned out; she clearly has had a lot of effort put into her lore

- The concept you have with Puzzles could be a great animated horror movie. I don't recall there ever being a need for 2-D animation for horror movies, but that just made me realize how much we need animated horror.

- If you're not squeamish and want to specify what exactly the prisoners went through in their time with Puzzles, I suggest you could do some research on Unit 731, which details Japanese experimentation on Chinese prisoners during WWII. Those are some of the most horrible experiments that I've ever learned about, and they probably are the most horrible if I'm to be honest. The whole idea of "watching the subjects of investigation slowly die, even as you're fully aware that they are human just like you" is what reminded me of that historical event.

- how is Puzzles so smart that no one but Delaney found out about her experimenting? Was there seriously no evidence left behind? How did she clean everything up so fast? shouldn't the police have canine units that can sniff out blood, or (even better) just all be dogs themselves so that their noses are really strong?

- who exactly is Puzzles' sister? 

HCs:

- Favorite food is beef tongue, beef liver, and steak tartare

- honestly, probably hates jigsaw puzzles. She seems a bit too impatient for them.

- a fan of the movie "Orphan"

- has a super high-pitched giggle but a super deep chuckle

- when she still had dolls, she would undress them completely, scribble on them, and cut their hair short (I'm calling myself out here)

- that's all I have lol, I hope you have a good day

- first off I saw him a lot in forum games before he had his design finished and I was really curious what he'd look like and I love the finished product. The robotic parts look really cool and I don't think I see metal pieces covering hearts in a lot of cyborg designs. It's an interesting and unique touch

- grrr gentle giant characters are the sweetest <3 The comparison to a big ol dog is cute. I used to have a big dog as a pet and he was a sweetheart so I just love to see characters like that

- I also love that he relates to kids because of his past and became a therapist. That's real sweet. 

- humanoids that act like animals is like my favorite oddly specific genre of characters lol. I think it just gives em charm (OMG THE TAIL WAG- 💕) 

- Max is fr a wholesome precious dog boy. The world does not deserve him

- damn he really loves peanut butter lmao. But I guess that is in line with his dog like nature

- I want to give him all the softest blankets and plushies in the world omg. Also does he have a favorite plushy? What's the longest one he's had? 

- has he ever had any romantic partners or does he just like the idea of romance/being romantic?

- I'm curious as to how he'd rust. Is it because he's been neglected or is it something semi natural for him? Like a monthly occurrence sort of deal

- the scars detail really hurt my soul :( he does not deserve that. Sucks that that trauma still sticks with him but now in the form of painful scars. Sort of symbolic in a sad way

- oh the detachedable tail detail is really neat, charming and unique. I wonder if he has different tails he can use when he wants

- I see where he his dog like behavior now. Honestly it's an interesting and unique way as to why a character acts animal like that's not the usual "raised by wolves trope." I like the trope but this is a nice little spin in it

- the good collar came from his heart? This feels like foreshadowing of what's to come. And maybe a symbol for false love and using "love" as a way to control someone to get what one wants or feeling as if they have power over them. Then him subsequently losing it feels like marking the end of that horrible relationship 

- Yuck. This "Ma'am" is a disgusting creep. It hurts to see how hard Max was looking for affection by practically hurting himself for her

- I got a little confused at the part where Max ratted out Emilia for taking care of a child. But I chocked it up to the cult's specific rules (?) Unfortunately this seemed to lead him into another spiral of self sabotage for others

- I find it interesting how in all these past relationships Max's heart was used for various things, and they all had one thing in common: for Max's love and loyalty. It feels like a metaphor for abusive relationships

Head canons

- has a plushy with a stitched heart on their chest. The heart is silver looking patch

- watches is VHS tapes of his favorite childhood shows

- wants to learn how to bake

- bed has a bunch of plushies on them and has those glowing star things on his ceiling

- sometimes listens to peaceful music or white noise to fall asleep faster

- is uncomfortable looking at gold jewelry because it reminds him of his past

v (oh yeah, you can do him. I just feel asleep before I could add who I wanted the person below to do. My apologies 😅)

There was no specific character listed so I just picked one- ( https://toyhou.se/15568618.nato-kai#54936569 )

1. I'll start off with his design, which is so eye-catching and fun to look at! The horns and tail are so cool! The long curly hair too, that's a really nice character design, love it !

2. His name is very original, I love that it has the "kai" of yôkai, and the fact that you added emojis to his listed names also attracted attention, a very interesting choice! You can immediately tell he's yokai and japanese themed. 

3. The list of stupid dares is insanely funny, I really love the idea of having a tab decicated to that. The 'yelled instead of talked for an hour' gave me such chaotic vibes, I love it. omg. This man is a legend. 

4. HE DOES NOT LIKE BLONDS.... I'm blond so im big sad. Maybe I would be part of the exceptions if I ever met him... I wonder why he doesn't like them. 

5. His story broke my heart. Curses are so sad, but I enjoyed it because I love drama- BABY YOU NEED A HUG please give him a hug...

6. He puts grafitis on bathrooms for fun, chaotic energy again. I wish you had an extra tab with a grafiti collection of his ! (also extra random HC : he himself takes pics of the grafitis to collect his mischiefs' memories) 

7. The fact that you associate symbols and emojis to your characters is such a brilliant idea ! I love it a lot, reminds me of vtuber oshi marks. Super creative idea! 

8. I'm sad we don't have his links/relationships, those are what I love reading most about characters! I hope he has a nice significant other/crush!

9. This is extra random but I wonder if there's a meaning behind the fact that some of the dislikes are pink and some are red, or if it's just the code doing weird stuff! 

10. I feel him about evading serious topics with jokes. I feel that so so deeply... I bet the jokes are funny too ! When you've got a past like his no wonder why you don't wanna talk about it ugh 

11. "He goes about life leisurely and takes time enjoying it to the fullest, since he's already died once he might as well truly live to die twice." the fact that THIS is the last line of the about section slaps so hard. SO SO HARD.... You couldn't have ended that section any better ! 

12. My absolute fav section aside from the dare tab is the trivias. You get to learn sooo much about him thru them. And every single line had me snorting, the goose battle especially. I bet when he retells that to others he twists it to make how vicious and rabit that goose was when the truth was probably that he tried messing with its eggs or babies...